KittCatt

Great chapter! Oh i wonder what happened to Kat's laptop. Not happy she and Ash slept together. Phoebe will probably go mental if she ever finds out. I think Kat needs to stay away from alcohol... At least Emerson was understanding. 'Kyle' seems to be getting ahead of himself now. Feeling so bad for him Loving Health being the supportive big brother. And Tamara. Like how Tamara is calling him 'Baby' and Health 'Mate'. I can see why 'Kyle' would hold onto any information he can regarding his identity and convince himself its the truth. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter once again! Really liking Oscar and Skye. And just Oscar in general. I hope they remain together, though in many ways that might not happen after the baby comes. Relationship trouble for Matt and Maddy. And Josh and Evie broke up. I get why Matt would want to leave, now before things get too serious and he can't deal with it. Unfortunate situation for everyone. I look forward to more

Great chapter! Really liked the moment between Kyle and Health. Very beautiful and well written. Poor Kyle doesn't know what to call himself now. So glad he has got Heath and Tamara to help him through it. I wonder what Kat's news is.. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Poor Kyle (Im just going to keep calling him that) Glad Kat stuck to her guns and didn't tell Nate what was going on. But i think she may have to tell Tamara (and Health) so they can understand what is going on. Very powerful scene when he didn't want Tamara to call him Kyle. You know how to make him suffer don't you It was good to get some more insight into the Melbourne case and what has happened. Glad the detective showed some compassion. Really liked the line Kyle certainly had a chequered past but he was hardly that much of a criminal mastermind. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! I like Oscar's attitude and enthusiasm. It's very different to last time. Loved him with his list. I do feel sorry for Matt. And Skye. I wonder how Matt is going to cope in the long run. Such a tough situation but constantly leaving Maddy and Oscar is only going to make him feel more excluded. Sounds a bit odd that Evie feels sorry for Tank and is keeping in contact. I liked her wondering why Oscar wasn't freaking out. I look forward to more, update soon

I go through periods of liking her and hating her because of her bad attitude and rudeness. Spoilers for UK:

Great chapter! Wow... was not expecting that bombshell. Neither was Kyle. Poor Kyle. Now his identity issues are going to re-appear in a big way. Health (and maybe Brax) should be there to support him as he deals with this. They are still brothers in every way that matters but Kyle is probably going to feel excluded from them- and from everyone else too as he questions who he is and where he came from. Great captivating and surprising chapter! The detective could've been a bit nicer... I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Very emotional moment between Kyle and Heath. Very well written. Glad Health was able to comfort Kyle knowing both of them were a bit uncomfortable. Feeling sorry for poor Kyle. Whatever Kat found must have been important. I hope things go well.. Regarding Phoebe, spot on with her characterization! Very self-involved personality and doesn't tend to see things from other peoples perspectives. I suspect she feels very guilty for telling Ash in the first place and is punishing him because she doesn't know how to punish herself. But still, Ash telling Brax and Kat was not right either. And he nearly told Kat that Brax was still alive... It looks like Kat doesn't think Phoebe's good enough for him, i suspect trouble between these three soon enough. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! While it would've been easier for Matt to be the father, i understand why Oscar is- drama. I wonder how Matt and Skye are going to cope. Glad Skye was honest about needing time to think though and didn't break up with him. Things will never be the same though. With a baby on the way i also wonder how Maddy and Oscar and by extension Matt are going to start preparing. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Once again the flashbacks provide some more information regarding Kyle's past. Wonderfully written. I thought it was Health that showed up Ash is in trouble now Why Phoebe ever told him... why he thought telling Brax was a good idea... I get that he cares about Kyle but he needs to think a bit more. Now that Health is here i can see Kyle pushing everyone away because they all know too much and he might feel self-conscious- like everyone is judging him even if they are only trying to help. He only told Phoebe and Tamara but now it seems everyone knows (except Andy, Josh, Ricky etc). Being able to disclose what has happened in his past was a big deal but now Phoebe, Ash and Brax have evaded his trust by telling other people Poor Kyle I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! I don't think talking to Kyle when he is working was the right thing for Kat to do. She should have waited a bit. Poor Kyle.. his trust in Phoebe is probably gone. And he thinks everyone's laughing at him. Liked Ash trying to comfort him.I wonder who he has told. Nice cliffhanger... Kyle's brother has arrived. I also liked the cute beginning with Tamara and little Noah I look forward to more, update soon

Nice little one shot Liked the twist of Zac and Brax being together. Oscar calling Zac and Brax 'Dads' was cute. Him being a bit creeped out by his twin and step-brother sleeping together is normal. Great stand-alone little story

Great chapter! Once again great flashback. Glad Kyle has Tamara for support. It is in character for Ash to do what he thinks is right no matter the consequences. Telling Kat was probably not the best idea but she could be able to help. Telling Billie and/or Brax would be awful though. It's Kyle's business not Ash's or Brax's. I often find myself not liking Ash so what he is doing is certainly in character. Great job I like his brotherly relationship with Billie though. I look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! I'm not sure Phoebe should have told Ash. That said though, his reaction was very in character- feeling sorry and angry for Kyle. If Kyle does find out Phoebe told Ash he would not trust her again, but i understand her having to express what she was feeling in regards to what has happened to Kyle. Sometimes when you see your loved ones hurt you need support too. Brilliant scene where Kyle told Tamara what had happened to him. Great writing Feel sad for poor Kyle. And it's understandable he would feel guilty for not coming forward to save other children from what he had been through. Such as terrible situation Now regarding the ending- Ash has certainly made a mess of things...As a police officer Kat would now want to know why Ash said that word and what it has to do with Kyle... I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Glad Maddy, Matt and Oscar were honest and told everyone about the pregnancy and paternity test. Glad Matt and Oscar were able to put aside their differences for Maddy. Liked the mention of Oscar previously being in a situation like this. Great dialogue. Liked the addition of Irene. It's up to Skye whether she sticks by Oscar if he is the father. Olivia's right though - she would always come second or third after the baby and Maddy and they only just began a relationship. Hope the baby is Matt's but i have a feeling it will be Oscar's. I look forward to more

Great Chapter! Glad Kyle was honest with Phoebe. But talking hasn't really helped- he is still having quite a rough time at the moment. Telling Tamara what happened then confronting it might be the only way to help. This is all happening at an unfortunate time where he should be enjoying fatherhood Liked the addition of Alf in this chapter. And now Ash is worried Phoebe is sick. I think there are problems ahead for Ash and Phoebe. I like that hearing what happened to Kyle affected her so much- it shows how much she cares for him. I hope Kyle starts to feel better soon, but angst and drama is often much more exciting than just being happy for us readers anyway, not the characters themselves...Brilliant writing once again. You have such a knack for making us feel for the characters as they go through trauma. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Once again the flashbacks provide some insight into what Kyle has been through and is struggling with now. Glad he is going to tell Phoebe. I liked the idea of the birthday party, pity Kyle hasn't really enjoyed it. The inclusion of other characters such as Zac and Leah is a nice touch. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Once again great writing, especially the vivid flashbacks and dreams. You capture Kyle's distress so well. Sad that Kyle is affected by what happened in his past so quickly. Glad he has got Tamara for support but he is adamant he doesn't want her to know. I think it's only going to get worse if he doesn't talk about it. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Glad Oscar was honest with Skye. I do wonder if she will end things with him. Glad she has Olivia to confide in. Glad Oscar, Matt and Maddy finally talked and were sort of reasonable. Hope the baby is Matt's. I look forward to more, have a nice holiday

Great Chapter! Continue to enjoy the conversations between the different characters. Evie and Oscar in particular was great, as well as Matt, Oscar and Josh at Angelo's. Hope both Matt and Oscar step up and talk to Maddy. Drinking isn't going to help. Talking to each other once the initial shock might help. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Happy that that baby arrived Kyle is such a cute father and i like the name Noah. Really liked how Evie and Josh as well as Phoebe and Ash come over to see the baby. And the cute family of Tamara, Kyle and little Noah. Pity Kyle is now reminded of his past and can't enjoy parenthood as much. I hope he is honest and confronts these issues and doesn't leave them festering in the background. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Love the sibling banter between the twins, as well as Olivia and Skye's relationship. Also enjoyed Skye and Oscar briefly talking about their lost sisters. Nice touch. Oscar didn't handle the news of the pregnancy as well as he could've but it's understandable that he's annoyed at her, even if it's not completely her fault. As someone who doesn't really like Maddy very much i liked this -“You know this is so typical of you!”Oscar exploded,“I’m finally getting my life sorted out, I’m putting you in the past where you belong, I’m getting on at uni, I’ve got a girlfriend who actually likes me for me, not just as some stop gap, and you dump this on me.” And i completely understand Oscar's frustration at her after what she has put him through in the past. I hope the baby is Matt's for Oscar's sake. Wonder how the others will take it- Roo, Zac, Leah and Evie in particular. Hope Oscar calms down eventually so they can all talk about it. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! The way you write these flashbacks are lovely. Glad David got a reaction out of younger Kyle. Poor Kyle, something traumatising must have happened. Glad music seemed to help him. And being able to say no must be a change from what he is used to. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter once again! Continue to enjoy Phoebe and her friendship with Kyle and Tamara. Like that you brought up Phoebe's miscarriage. Natural that Tamara would want to know more about Kyle's past now that they are having kids. The continuing flashbacks are a great way for us to piece together what he has gone through as a child. Great job Like that even though Josh is blind he is enjoying life and studying at uni. I look forward to more, update soon

Great Chapter! Continue to like Oscar and Skye. They work together very well and the kissing was very sweet Surprised that Maddy is pregnant. And she isn't 100% sure who the father is.. I wonder if she will be honest with Oscar, though this might jeopardize his new relationship with Skye. I look forward to more, update soon