KittCatt

Great Chapter Glad Tamara's surgery seemed to work. Like that her sight didn't just magically come back good as new. The eyes and the brain need time to adjust to new sensory information. Hope it gets better gradually. Also really like how Kyle is supporting her. Glad Kat found some evidence. I know she didn't believe him when he spoke to her earlier but i thought any good police officer would survey the surroundings for signs of forced entry at the first call. At least josh can be reassured now people believe him. Glad Andy feels a little guilty. If he wasn't so quick to judge perhaps Kat may have found evidence sooner. Interested to hear how Evie feels about this too. Look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Feel so sorry for Josh. No one believed him and they didn't even really seem to try. Understandable that Josh is angry at them but he still needs them, Andy especially. Heartbreaking scene with Josh and Andy at the end. Very powerful writing xx Hope everyone can be a little more understanding and compassionate in the morning, especially Evie. I think he needs her more than she realizes. Update soon

Great chapter! Feeling so sorry for Josh. Everyone is doubting him but he know's what really happened. Wish Andy and everyone else would believe him. But am glad he is pushing through and wants to call Kat. You captured Josh's anger and misery perfectly, as well as Andy's doubts and heartache at the hospital. Well done. Also enjoying Andy and Evie's scenes throughout the story. Keep it up. Update soon

Great chapter Gee waking up next to Tank like that would've been so frightening. Wonder what exactly Tank did. Loved how you captured Josh's fear. Hope everyone soon realizes Tank has done this. Glad Ash and Phoebe found Josh. Things don't look great for him.. Also continue to love Tamara. And Kyle Great writing once again, update soon

Great chapter! Liked that Mark and Josh talked about everything that has happened. Glad he has a diagnosis and medication will help. But there are side effects and its not a quick fix. Loved how everyone was in fits of laughter because of Kyle. That was great and i think everyone needed it. Poor Josh thinking that he caused the fire himself. Don't think Evie should've left Josh alone. Creepy Tank is so very creepy. Wonder what exactly he has planned.. Look forward to more

Great Chapter Tank watching Evie and Josh sleep is really creepy. People really need to learn to lock their doors. Glad Evie's jealously didn't really cause problems. Quite the opposite actually.Like that you still include details about their intimate relationship even though their lives are a bit messed up right now. Glad Josh was able to go out into the water. Hate that everyone probably thinks he is crazy. Hate that Josh is actually starting to doubt himself aswell. Wish everyone would give him a bit more credit. Once again great writing, update soon

Great Chapter Loved the reunion between Tamara and Kyle! Glad they can easily reignite their friendship. Hope to see more of this. Understandable Josh is easily panicked and doesn't want to be comforted by his girlfriend. Hope Evie's jealousy of Tamara's ability to provide some sort of comfort doesn't make things worse but i get why she is concerned. Completely in character. Also love how you have understood Josh's character as he is going through this- he needs support and comfort but people touching him and feeling sorry for him makes him even more uncomfortable. Hard situation for everyone involved. Look forward to more, update soon

Great chapter! Love Evie continuing to support Josh and encouraging him to do things he isn't that comfortable with. Glad Josh is beginning to feel better talking about his experiences with the group session Sad no one believed Josh, hope they find the attacker but don't see how unless he attacks again (got a feeling it's Tank too). Hope Kyle reacts to Tamara well. She needs some good news. Hope her surgery went well but at the same time i don't know if Josh would react well as it seems his is permanent. Another great chapter, update soon

Great Chapter! Glad Josh was having fun with his friends before the attack. Still loving Kyle's role in this story. You can really tell he cares about Josh in a big brotherly way. The attack must have been so scary i can't even imagine. Hope Andy, Evie and Kyle believe that he was attacked. Hope Josh begins to feel safe soon. Great writing, update soon

Great chapter! Loved Tamara's introduction. Very sad she was never informed about Casey's death. Also very sad that her surgeries are continually not working. Would love for her and Kyle to interact again. Wonder if she holds and anger/resentment towards Oscar for causing her blindness? Once again great writing and glad Josh's first session went smoothly. Update again soon

Great chapter! Once again loving Evie, Andy and Kyle's involvement in this story. Great. Glad Josh faced tank, now i'm worried about Evie. Update soon

Great chapter! Josh's dream suddenly turning into a nightmare must have been very frightening. Great writing as usual. Love how Any and Evie continue to support Josh. The insight you give them show their reactions wonderfully. Tank not only hurt Josh but everyone who really cares about him too. After that panic attack it makes sense to agree to talk to Tank. Hope it goes well. Update again soon

Great chapter Great that Mark is having a positive influence but understandable Josh doesn't want to talk to Tank. Maybe it would help but the anxiety might be too much Love Andy and Evie being supportive Keep up the good work, update soon please

Great chapter Glad Josh decided counselling was a good idea Loving Kyle's involvement too Once again, great job! Update soon

Great story!! Interesting to know what goes on inside Josh's head as he struggles with the realities of being blind, something the show only just touched on. Not only interesting to read but your a great storyteller!! Keep up the good work and look forward to more.