Suzza101

Great chapter. Looks like the boys are not the least bit good, I feel so sorry for them. In there without their brothers and dealing with this all must be so hard and they are going to need losts of help to get past this. I hope that everyone else will come out safe as well because at the moment it's not looking promising. Cant wait to read more, please update soon.

Great Chapter. Love the friendship between them all and how they were all worried for Kyle. Poor Kyle, not only the fact that he was bullied but to be in an uneven fight and for it to be videoed for them to laugh at whenever they want is just horrible. cant wait for the next chapter please update soon.

Great chapter, You are such an amazing writer I love reading what you write and can never wait until I read the next chapter. The poor boys! I'm excited but so so worried to see what will happen to Josh and Kyle next Haven't they been through enough. Really worried that Heath might be dead, I hope not. It would crush the whole family and Kyle will be heartbroken to know that he was trying to help him, Bianca and the baby!! I'm crossing my fingers that Heath is still alive and he stays that way. I cannot wait to read more, please update soon.

GREAT CHAPTER! I love how much Roo cares about Kyle. I really hope that he is going to be okay. There are a lot of people who care about him. Can't wait for the next flashback! I LOVE THEM!

love love love it, I'm sorry for not always commenting but I am loving reading your fanfic, Ohh I love little Kyle. Loving the flashbacks he obviously means a lot to his family and it's obvious to see that he's not used to it. I love Ricky and Kyle and I always saw her as Kyle's big sister but in this, she's more like a mum it's adorable. Please update soon. Ps I hope that your friend is okay.

Great chapter, oh no the boys are really struggling and who can blame them really. They've done things that won't sit well with either of them. Aaron still being there for Kyle is giving me mixed emotions. On one side I'm glad that he's got someone there to help him through it all and tell him that it's going to be okay but on the other hand Aaron is dead and it's only going to hurt Kyle more when he eventually has to say goodbye and stop seeing him. i hope that Heath is okay, but I have a bad feeling it's not over. I just hope that in the end everyone will make it out of it. Oh dear Kat.. No ...just no. Cant wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter, I hope that Kyle pulls through.. but it doesn't sound too good but I'm glad that everyone else seems to be okay. Wonder where Ray is? Can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter, this does not look the least bit good, the boys are in a very tricky situation. Punish those who have crossed Ducky which will only make them guilty and Kyle might completely break down again if he hurts them too badly. But if they don't they will get beaten up themselves possibly even killed, This does not look good at all, they are stuck in. I'm so worried for Heath, he's stuck there and getting starved and dehydrated. I really hope that he will make it out of this alive. Brax would lose it if he lost another brother and the only brother he had left was stuck in a prison where he keeps getting beaten and unknown to him raped. I hope that the Braxtons can all make it through this. OHNO now Bianca knowing that Heath is missing is not good at all, not a good move from Brax and Ricky. I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon.

Amazing chapter. I'm so worried for Josh and Kyle and I really hope that the deal goes well, Kyle wouldn't be able to live with himself if Heath got hurt because of him not doing a deal right. They are both really struggling and now they are both rape victims that can't be easy. I'm really glad that he didn't end up killing Jae and adding more to his sentence, but since he did at least the prisons now that he isn't easy to attack. He's probably even helped him and Josh a bit at least for now. Poor Ash and Brax just waiting to find out if Heath is going to be okay. Everyone is being hurt in this story and as tragic as it is it makes for an amazing read, I can't wait to read more, Please update soon.

Great chapter, poor Kyle and Josh things don't get any easier for them. Sounds like both the older Braxton brothers have gotten themselves in danger to try and save their little brother and Josh. It's quite sad that through all these people there's no one just willing to help. I hope things improve soon. Can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Great chapter, omg!!! Poor Kyle and Josh, they sound like they are so broken and terrified. Brax not being able to recognise Josh until he saw Kyle is just tragic. Kyle jumpiness obviously didn't go unnoticed to Brax.. wonder what Brax will say when he finds out about the rape he won't be too happy at all when he finds out what happened to his little brother and I have a feeling it will all come out eventually with a Big Bang. That 3D thing sounds very interesting, oh no a change of plan.. that's not the least bit good. Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chapter.

Great chapter, Poor Kyle and Josh they are both really struggling. Now Kyle has been raped... things aren't getting any better for these boys and i doubt that Kyle will want to talk about it at all and i thing that will only break him more. Him crying to the image he is seeing of Aaron apologising for betraying him was heartbreaking. I don't think that things are going to get easier for josh either especially now that he is cutting I just hope that these two will be there for eachother because if one goes the other will be targeted and hurt even more. They need eachother to survive this. I liked the fact that you added in that Ash hates drugs. And I can't wait to read more. I'm absolutely loving it. Please update soon.

Great chapter, I can't believe that Dimitri is a federal agent.. I was not expecting that. But I like the old Dimitri more, I'm worried that things aren't going to get any better for Kyle and Josh. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Great chapter I'm glad that Kyle and Josh are safe but it sounds like it's not over. I wonder what happened to Kyle, he seemed a bit shaken up. There are so many twist. I LOVE IT! I can't wait to see what happens next and if Kyle and Josh's 'friends' are going to help them. Please update soon I can't wait to read more!!!

Great chapter. Ohno this doesn't look good at all, it looks like they are going to get hurt or worse... very brave of both of them though. Josh for talking back at them and Kyle for facing them off. But have a bad feeling that it wasn't such a good idea, sounds like their in for a lot of pain. Im both intrigued and nervous but am looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait!! Please update soon.

Great couple of chapters... I LOVE THE KYLE AND JOSH FRIENDSHIP! Im a bit worried that something is going to go wrong, and either Kyle or Josh are going to get hurt. Maybe smithies going to start treating Kyle like he does Josh. I hope not and I really hope that the boys can help before something goes terribly wrong (Backtrack to the last chapter. I felt so sorry for Kyle when he found out that it was all a dream and how it ended too soon, he's really missing Aaron and I don't know how he will be handling things. Probably not well as he's already acting weird.)

Amazing chapters!! I really hope that everyone is okay, but I have a bad feeling it is no where near the end for Kyle. I feel bad for Ray as he was just trying to help. Can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Great chapter. Interesting idea as Brax as a drug dealer, I'm really glad that josh didn't take the drugs. I hope that him and Kyle will be safe but I fear that the worst isn't over, can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter, I hope that Keith will actually help Josh I'm not liking the idea of Smithy wanting to find out more about the Braxton's. I can't wait to read more Please update soon

Great chapter, I'm glad that Kyle was there for josh and he's making sure that he looks after himself by making sure he eats, even though he tried to push him away at times. I wonder what will happen with Brax and the Fed, I can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great couple of chapters, Poor both Kyle and Josh. Firstly Kyle for when Ricky came to visit and he was just so upset in the last chapter I really hope that he'll turn out okay and I hope he'll stop getting angry at his family as much as they deserve it for not visiting in so long, but he needs them. And Josh oh no it's just horrible, at least he's with Kyle, hoping that Kyle will be able to protect him and get the money to Smithy with everyone's help because I'm pretty sure he gave the last of his money to help Josh last time. I really hope that they will both be okay. They are both struggling in their own ways with sharing a cell, even if it is with each other. I really hope that they will be able to help each other, Can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter. How could Brax and Heath act that way, Kyle's their little brother and Heath was laughing. They were both trying to try and convince themselves that it wasn't true. Brax was even struggling to call Aaron, Kyle's boyfriend. I found it sad how they weren't there for their little brother. Poor Kyle but I feel like a visit from Bianca and Ricky might help they will be a lot more understanding. I'm really glad that Keith will try to help Josh to help him get in the right path. Can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great Chapter. I'm surprised but glad that Kyle told Heath and Brax that he loved Aaron and that they never treat him right. It was very fair, I can't believe Brax wasn't going to even go see Kyle when he came back from the 'dead'. I feel that Kyle was very fair in getting mad at Heath, EIGHT MONTHS!!! that's so long not to come and visit your brothers in prison, it must have felt good for kyle to get ti all off his chest. I was shocked when he called himself Kylie, He hates that name and for him to call himself it was gut wrenching although he was been holding onto this for a while now and I guess he just knew that it was time. I wonder how Brax and Heath will react. I really hope that they will expect it or else Kyles heart will be scattered more and it will only make him feel bad about himself.

Great chapter. Poor Kyle seeing Aaron and everyone seeing him as insane I wonder what his brothers will think. I like how you added Dr walker into this I hope he'll be able to help josh, can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great Chapter, Awww Poor Kyle I don't blame him for ripping up all those pictures it must be really painful to know that they are all happy and Aaron had just died after being so close to getting out. It's not that fair really. I wonder if Kyle will talk to his brothers when they visit him, or will he even look at them or let them see him. The boys will really have to try hard if they want Kyle to tell them what happened, Aarons ghost is sweet luckily but I don't think it will go well for Kyle if he keeps seeing him, he will already be seen as a leper in prison after everyone found out he was gay probably. I can't wait to read more please update soon.