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Great chapter, I also find Ray funny in this and I'm loving his involvement in the fanfic, I'm extremely curious as well to see what Derek wants with Kyle and I can't wait to read more please update soon.

Poor Kyle, that's so sad being locked up in there. As hard as it would of been I'm glad he got to say goodbye to Aaron. I have no idea how he's going to handle it outside the hole with everyone knowing that he his gay and that his boyfriend died, I hope Josh will help him as much as he can but I feel like he will have to tell his brothers so that they can help him as well, I can't wait to read more please update soon

Amazing chapter, loved the scene with the Braxton's and how they all were worried about Kyle and Josh, how they wished that they had visited more. NOOO Aaron's dead, I was so sad reading that. Kyle's heart would be broken and now he's isolated from everyone else, that is not good. The part when they explained that Kyle wouldn't let go of Aaron it kind of reminded me of Brax and Casey. I wonder how Kyle will be able to handle prison knowing that Aaron is dead. Will people still give him grief? Will he tell his family, that Aaron was his boyfriend? I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Great chapters. Im loving it, I don't think that it was a good idea for Tamara to tell everyone what Kyle told her. And it seems that Ray really wants to get home which will mean that they probably go for Kyle soon. Poor Kyle finding the snake and having a panic attack. Glad Phoebe is helping him and I hope that he will be okay. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Loved this chapter, it sounds like Aaron has been stabbed, I really hope that he is going to be okay, What if he dies? it's his last day and not only that. it would break Kyle if e died, I really hope he pulls through. It's nice that Josh has a friend, I can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter. Gezzz poor Josh, Kyle and Aaron now they are all in danger. Hopefully Aaron gets out though without getting really hurt, but I'm worried that he'll do something stupid to not leave Kyle. Wow they knew all along, but now the danger could come for Aaron and Kyle. I hope josh will be alright, Josh's realization about Kyle are Aaron must of been shocking. I wonder if it will be similar to what Braxs and Heath's reactions will be if they ever find out. Can't wait to read more, please update soon

Great chapter. Poor josh, things are not looking very good for him at all, and making him feel like he's being babysat wouldn't make him feel better either, I hope that Kyle and Aaron do get to spend their last night together but I have a bad feeling that that's when they're going to get caught, if they don't get hurt by Vasily and his goons before then, and poor Josh he's not getting any luck and now Vasily is after him, I can't wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter, Poor Josh nothing is getting easier for him and I agree with pembie everyone is crazy in there apart from Kyle, Aaron and Josh, can't wait to read more please update again soon

, I loved how the boys are pretendinging that they had no clue that the girls stole their stuff, priceless i can't wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter, gezz Kyle way to ruin a lovely moment ? It was cute while it lasted deep down Kyle's probably hurting quite bad and just would find it easier to push Aaron away 100% instead of seeing him in visits and knowing that they can't properly be together until he's got and he doesn't want Aaron to wait that long, poor Josh i can't stop worrying about him, it has to all stop, I'm really hoping that he will be able to bunk with Kyle where he will be safe, can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter, poor Josh that wasn't funny at all. Awwww Kyle and Aaron are just so adorable, it's going to be heartbreaking when Aaron leaves it's only just over a day away and I just hope that for both of their sacks they aren't caught, imagine if they get caught out and Aaron leaves leaving Kyle with the harassment (that's if they get any, which in prison I think they would with all the rough sickos that are in there) I can't wait to read more please update soon

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Great chapter I really loved it.Josh shouldn't talk so soon in time maybe he will if he's not ready it wouldn't be a good idea to talk. I'm glad that Ricky did well with the exchange I was a bit worried. Whoa at the end. It doesn't look good. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon

Great chapter Ludub, i have mixed feelings about Alexei leaving on one hand he can't terrorize Josh anymore but on the other hand he was a main character in your fanfic. Ohhh new guys that are after Josh now, how will Kyle protect Josh against these bigger and scarier inmates. I feel really sorry for Josh it never ends. Can't wait to read more please update soon. (Looks like Aaron hasn't left yet but it sure will be getting close abc then Kyle will have to build s new life for himself as well as helping Josh)

Great chapter, I'm loving this so much seeing everyone as teenagers is so cool and I'm loving all the pranks but like Ludub i hope that they don't take things too far, can't wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter. Sad that Kyle and Aaron will be torn apart soon but hopefully that will mean that Josh can stay in Kyle's cell. I liked them being friendly towards Josh. I'm curious to see what Josh did to Alexei, can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter, poor Kyle it's so sad that Aaron is getting out so soon and leaving Kyle all alone, what if they get caught and then Aaron leaves to leave Kyle with the danger, poor Josh this is just terrible, he needs to be helped asap or else things aren't going to be pretty. I really hope that Ricky manages to get the money to the prison without landing herself in prison. Can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter. Awww Kyle finally said I love you to Aaron very sweet, I just hope that him and Brax will be able to help Josh before things get even worse for him and I hope that Ricky will understand once she hears the full story, can't wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter, poor Josh he hasn't had it easy at all but I'm really happy that he might be able to get away the sooner the better in my opinion, I would also love if he did end up in a room with Kyle because Kyle will do everything in his power to protect him, he's already got himself beaten up to help Josh how much further will he go to make sure that Josh is safe but I'll be sad for Kyle when Aaron leaves, I love how when Aaron grabbed Kyle's hand he didn't pull away, I really hope that he will be able to tell Aaron that he loves him before he gets released although I'm nervous it will attract some unwanted attention, extremely enjoying this fic please update soon

Yea he did chase then like a lost puppy he did so many things for them just to please them.

Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Aaron and Kyle had spent the night together but it must be hard for them to have to hide it from everyone, because of the danger of being in prison where I'm sure there are a lot of homophobes. Sad to hear that Kyle was being given grief from Gunno and his crew before Gunno left and I thought that Brax would be more sympathetic towards Kyle because he was the one that made an enemy of those guys in the first place. I wish that Kyle will be able to tell Brax about Aaron even though there could be dangers. I found it awful to hear that Heath hadn't even seen Kyle in nearly 6 months how exactly is that meant to make Kyle feel. Kyle seeing Casey and nearly crying was so sad, he did practically raise him through the baby years and he will nearly be a teenager when when Kyle gets out. Poor Josh, Alexei sounds horrible, he is just awful, he's very creepy as well it make shivers go down my back Josh needs to get out of there as soon as possible. I really hope that Kyle will be able to get the money from Brax so that he will be able to help Josh before things go from bad to worse, I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon. xx

Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Kyle got himself beaten up just to see Josh it really shows how much he cares about Josh, he dilbertly got himself in a fight just so he could make Josh feel better. Poor Josh though I really hope that Kyle does manage to get Josh out of the cell with cuddles. Kyle and Aaron are adorable I just hope that Kyle will express that he does love him. I hope that he will say those three words, he seems really nervous about seeing Brax and I find it quiet sad that Brax has cancelled on him the last complete of times, how is that meant to make him feel? I'm so glad that Aaron was there to support him. When Aaron leaves I really hope that him and Kyle will stay together and that Kyle will be able to tell his brothers about it. Can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Great chapter, seems like Kyle is gay, hopefully he opens up about it so that Aaron knows that Kyle cares about him to. Wonder how the conversation between Kyle and Brax will go when he asks for money to help Josh and if the fact that they totally abandoned him will come up in the conversation and his relationship with Aaron and how his brothers will react, I don't think that Kyle will tell especially if Heath is there because of the constant teasing he gives Kyle . Poor Josh still getting grief and I like that Kyle is still helping him. Can't wait to read more please update soon

Great chapter I loved how Josh explained to Kyle everything that has gone on in Summer Bay, but I was extremely sad to hear that Brax and Heath don't really visit. Poor Kyle being locked up and abandoned wouldn't be much fun at all, at least he's got Josh now. Prison would be a pretty lonely place and I doubt that either of them would survive their time without having someone that they know with them. I really like how Kyle is there for Josh when Andy can't be, really shows that family man that he is, can't wait to read more please update soon.

Great chapter, thanks for updating. Loved how the boys kept getting woken up by the alarms and Kyle's comment about ruining his sleeping patterns, very funny especially with the boys reaction to that comment. I really like the idea of the boys pretending that nothing happened very clever and the girls will get annoyed. Can't wait to read more, please update soon.