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Fantastic chapter Nicole. God I hate Callum so much, I'll probably go and get a chain saw soon and cut him up. Lol.

Another great chapter Nicole. God I hate Mia and Callum so much.

I hate Callum so much. Anyways aother fantastic chapter Nicole. I really thought that Martha and Callum thing was actually real, if it was I would have probably killed Callum. Lol. Hope you write more soon.

That was such a wonderfully written chapter Nicole. I can't wait for more.

Well done bay girl. Great few chapters. Can't wait for more.

Excellent writing Nicole. Stupid Callum, I really want to punch him. =D

Bay girl I really love your fan fic, it is so grea. Well, I hope you update soon.

Great chapter Nicole. I really liked it , it was so romantic. Anyways Happy Birthday for tomorrow.

Great chapter Dolly. I am totally loving it. Hope you update soon.

Great chapter bay girl. Yay Jack has figured it out. I hope he rescues Martha and Irene now.

Great chapter Nicole.

Another great chapter. I hope thy figure out it's Corey. Hope you update soon.

OMG the last chapter was so great. Hope you update soon.

Great chapters Nicole.

Great chapter Nicole. I can't think of why Martha would want to be friends with Callum again. Hope you update soon.

Great writing Nicole. I just started reading the story just then and it is so good. Why can't Callum just clear off and leave them alone? I can't wait to hear what Martha wants to tell Jack. Hope you update soon.

Come on Jack, you've got to save Martha and Irene. Geeat chapter bay girl.

You have written such awesome stories jackandmartha!!! I absolutely loved both of them and I was thrilled to hear you're writing a new one. You have such a talent for writing and I hope you continue to use it.

Come on Jack you have to say something. Great chapter.

Great writing Tess. I hope Rachel doesn't die.

I love this story. You are such a great writer. Poor Martha. I hate Warren so much.

Great chapter. Corey is really freaking me out. I never thought he was a cold-blooded killer.

Great writing, jackandmartha!!! I hope you upate soon.

Great chapter bay girl. Corey is so pyscho. I hope he gets what he deserves.

Nicole you are such an awesome writer. From the first time I read Undercover Cop I completely fell in love with it and from then you have made the story even better with all its twists and turns.