Janet.D

That was beautiful, I can't actually here them talking, you should become a writer, or maybe work in TV, you do have a talent. The people who do Home and Away, made a mistake with one scene of Maddie when she went missing, in one scene they had her left arm cut off and in the next, it was the right arm, or at least it was like that here in the UK where I live. Good luck with your writing, and write more like this one