princess_jessik

Thanx for the update! I like the backstory with Peter & him & Claire. Hopefully Jack will get the hint!

OMG, wow! Why did you have to leave it there? Lol Update soon!

Aawwwww. lol thats so cute hehheee I really like it, its so sweet!

Omg!?!! How could anyone think that!!! This story is really good bay_girl. Can't wait to read some more because this is looking good!

Omg! I haven't been on, so I've just read the whole story, straight through. Wow, Wow, Wow!!! I love it. Another great story Nicole. Can't wait to read some more! ;)

Same!! Very good story, I'm really into this now!!

Aww I like that movie. Such a shame about Katie Holmes now compared to then.

Well you asked for it so here is my opinion: There needs to be another 'us'. Otherwise we will be all sad . So please make it so there is 'us' and then everyone will love it. hahaa jokes. Your story is great. I love it. And I read every single Jack & Martha fic & never get bored. Just sometimes abit sad/happy/mad lol And you don't need to change your story. Just write how you want, and if people don't like it well in my opinion that's there problem because this story is amazing.

^^ So would the rest of the world's population. hahaa and not just because Jack isn't crazy.

Awww. Omigod!! That was so so so good. I loved it Nicole! I remember when I first read the first chapter of Undercover Cop 1 on HAAC. I thought how good it was. It's gotten so much better then good. And now everytime that I come on, either her or HAAC I always check for an update because I couldn't get enough of this story. Hehee now I've read it all! So I'm kinda sad, but I can't believe that I read all 96 pages. I'm very proud of myself. And wow you typed 96 pages?! I hope you type fast or you would've put alot more time into this story then I assume you did. Anyway congratualtions! & there is going to be a sequel!! yay!!!

awwww.... apart from the end that was a really funny chapter. Poor Mac. Great chapter.

So do I. awww I'm starting to get sad. I think this story is going to end soon. Great writing as usual.

awww. Glad you are back Dolly so you can update the wonderful stories! lol Hope your holiday was nice.

aww....great chapter. I love the stubborness that they both have. It is cute but they need to get over their pride and get back together. Soon.

Can you please update? lol Great story Nicole. Can't wait to read more!

awww, even though they aren't together he's worried about her. That's soo cute. lol Great story, Nicole!

awww why aren't Summer Bay's resisdent cops around when they are needed? lol Great story!

wow that was shock, maybe that julia person is obssessed with Jack in a freaky scary way like Mumma Rose was obssessed with Tasha. Ohh I hope not. lol great story! Update soon please

^^ hmm I think I like Jack better....getting Martha to go to New York for an apology?!! Very loving boyfriend. Great story!

ohh..this story is getting really exciting. Why won't those people let her go?!! She needs to be with Jack.