Sorry I took my time in reviewing.
Firstly cliffhanger! Even though I know what's going to happen that line still came as a huge shock and was very well done. I loved the descriptions of Megan, I think everyone knows someone like that.
I could just see her in my minds eye. Superb description.
Kim is so innocent and naive and I love the new side you've given him.
Kit and Noah, just a brief mention but god I love those two together. Its just so sweet and the way you write them, it's like they're just meant to be.
I'm falling in love with Gypsy and Jack, Gypsy is so self loathing, I have so much pity for her and Jack's so cute with her. I know the JM fans will be screaming noooo but I really think their pairing works.
It just makes me see things from inside Gypsy's head. Very effective.
I know I'm going backwards but:
Fantastic opening, really set the scene for Martha's anger and Cassie defending him, Hayley thinking of herself and Adam Kerr trying it on, the reactions were spot on in this first scene.
I thought this was a fab chapter and you'd be a fool to think otherwise, sorry I haven't been aroiund to tell you that sooner.
Just one error, it's Cassie Turner not Parker but if I'd have been around to proof read I'd have told you that so I take the blame.