Well I thought that was an awesome chapter. I don't think you've ruined it at all, if it wasn't for you we wouldn't have a chapter at all because I do not feel like writing at the moment.
The Kane stuff is awesome, he's so dark and dangerous, I've just got such a sense of foreboding from him and after what he just did to Hayley...poor Cass. At the same time I feel sorry for him too, hes had a touch life and maybe in Cassie he'll be able to feel more sympathy towards her?
Its great to see some of Martha's past explored as well, makes her seem more human and more real when you dig into the background. I love her depth of affection to Cassie and Cassie's s vulnerable, pushing Martha away. I'm getting really worried about Cassie, she seems like a girl on the edge.
I thought it was an excellent chapter and paves the way for lots of exciting stuff to come. Thank you so much for posting for me, I really appreciate it, just maybe I might actually write some of my own story sometime soon.