dolly-999

Hey just read the whole thing and I'm loving it. Hope Belle's baby is Aden's, I would hate it if it was Drew's. can't wait for the next chapter.

Loved it. Well done. Awww, Jack and Martha can be so cute sometimes, love the interaction between them. Can't wait to see where this goes. Awesome start, can't wait to read more.

Martha's dad's so evil, don't like him one bit at all, Martha should get an AVO out against him, he's out of control. Love the Holden's, there the complete opposite to Martha's family the way they've taken Martha in even though their families are enimies. Can't wait to see where your going with this story, loving reading it. Awesome job.

ouch, sounds extremely painful, poor Martha

Martha's dad's evil, how could he do that to her? Atleast she said she loves Jack. Loving how this story is coming along. Can't wait to see what happens next.

This reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, I just hope they don't die at the end. Good Job.

Nice start, it's certainly looking interesting already, I'm guessing the girl was Martha? Can't wait to read more, good job.

lol, didn't expect that, Jack crying? Poor guy now she's walked out on him. Loved it though, nice to read something different. Good Job