Calm down girly! Lol. I'd run if I were you dolly-999, she might just get violent. =P
She has a good point though! OMG! Why? It's a flippin Jack and Martha fic! Lol. I was quite sad when I was reading through, but one question remained in my head. "Are you a fan of Jack and Martha?" lol
Great writing though! =D
lol *runs to nearest hiding place*
Just for the record, yes I am a Martha and Jack fan, but when it comes to writting, sometimes I write the complete opposite to what I actually want to happen just for the sake of it or to prove a point, (e.g. Jack and Martha after the storm. For those of you who haven't read it, basically it's set after the cyclone, a few weeks later Martha gets pregnant, Alf gets cranky, they have massive fights for mounths, Martha can't handle the stress anymore, she gets rushed to hospital, dies after a few hours, then at her funeral Jack jumps of the cliff where they had their first kiss on, and lets just say nobody ever sees him again).
An yes it is a martha and jack fic, there both in it, just not together, but that could change or it might not, I haven't decided yet.