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Aww that was so sweet I hope you decide to continue it!

I think it was that movie that i watched a couple of years ago at a sleepover party. Just as the guy was about to murder someone, one girl let off a party popper. You should have heard us all scream. If you ever want to scare people in a scary movie that works everytime! The last movie i watched was in english class, called 'The Hurricane' It was the true story of Rubin Carter. It was really good!

That last part was so cute! Jack is just so sweet Brett is such a jerk.

That was fantastic! Great writing and descriptions and.. everything!! That letter was beautiful as well it made me want to cry *thumbs up*

Wow. I really didn't see that one coming. What a creep i hope he gets thrown back into prison for what he's done. Great writing Amber, i love it how Jack's so protective of Martha, it's sweet

Aww Jack! The poor thing... Richard... Wow i was surprised when Henry came back, and kinda scared when Jack couldn't find Martha. I hope Henry just randomly decides to give up and take a trip around the world Ignore me, i'm in a weird mood Update again soon!

Aww what a great ending, it made me smile I hope you write more fics in the future!

^That bit made me laugh. That was my favourite bit as well as this bit....( there's no arrows that point down-ways on the keyboard bugger.) ^Awww. Very sweet! Update again soon

Jack! The poor guy... Flashback time! I hope it has something to do with Jack

Jacks not gonna die Yippeeee!!!! Great chapter.

The Pursuit of Happiness - Great movie! I definately recommend it.

I was so excited when i saw the update! So it was Corey she remembered, the descriptions you gave in that flashback were great by the way. Hmm with the pregnancy i have NO idea.

I think that's the best chapter i have ever read Loved how Jack offered to call her a bitch and she just cut him down straight away. Awesome chapter and writing Amber. I hope you do put the next part up tomorrow

Aww that J/M-ness was so cute Made me smile Thankyou! But i want a kiss...please

Great last chapter! In fact great story, i loved it Can't wait for the sequal But until then i guess i'll just amuse myself with your other fics.

That was great Sian! I'm confused though, are you taking over writing this whole fic or are you and baby_gurl taking turns Anyway loving the story and hope to read some more soon!

Yay i got two updates Can't believe Tasha joined the cult and dumped her husband and kids! Shows how much she cares... Wonder what Jack's proposal for Martha is? Hope there's more soon.

Damn you for leaving it there! But i spose if you were tired... Great story baby_gurl, i'm loving reading it. Hope theres more again soon.