Wannabe a hobbit?

^ Haha, that just made me laugh. Couldn't agree more Very well said - very blunt and straight to the point lol. Sorry, kind of random must be all the diet coke I drink! God, I'm still chuckling *breathes in, breathes out* Nicole, what a stir you're causing! You must be very pleased with yourself... Fantastic chapters as usual, can't wait to read more and see Callum get his just deserts. Which I'm sure he won't get too soon if you have anything to do with it ;)

Thanks for all these amazing chapters! This is a fantastic story and I can't wait for the next chapter

Fantastic chapter, keep it up kiddo Happy Birthday to you! Hope you have a great day

An old flame stirring up trouble, everyone seems to have it in for Jack these days. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one

I'm undecided :S If she is clowning around then she needs her head checking, can't she see that this is all going to end badly? If she is being kidnapped then RUN Jack RUN!

Very well written Nicole, I must say You tackled the issue very well. You may not believe me but I had a inkling that thats what the secret would be, oh yes I was on the ball ;) Can't wait for the final installement, keep up the good work

Nicole, I do not know where you find the time, god knows how many fan fics and music videos, it's incrediable and for them all to be of such a high standard. I applaud you Fantastic start, can't wait to read more

Yay, Nicole has struck gold again! Great start

I know it's kind of late coming since you finished last week but this fan fic has been so fantastic. You've keep me and I'm sure other member as well in suspense each time you've posted which just shows how skilled a writer you are I can't believe it's over but I see you have posted the sequel so I'm going to skip off and read that. I'm sure it will be as great as the previous

Fantastic as usual I can't believe it's going to end soon You better give us a happy ending Nicole...Please update soon!

If Martha doesn't listen to Lucas, I'm tempted to push her off that cliff (or at least pay someone to do it) On a lighter note - another great chapter

Whoops a daisy. Prize for worst timing goes to...cough*Peter*cough I feel a storm a brewing... Fantastic as usual

This is fantastic! Its amazing how you've managed to keep everything together when there seems to be so much going on! Please update soon

Lol, I'm only joking, Summer Bay wouldn't be the same without them! - No Jack! I take back all the negative comments I made, we should be worshipping them!

Lol, theres me thinking you were a nice person, dear me was I far off the mark! All the baddies are fictional clones of Nicole! Lol! Yea, Trevor and Jenny are totally my twins! =P I knew it! I think I should be part of the Summer Bay police team then they might actually have some chance of solving a case!

Lol, theres me thinking you were a nice person, dear me was I far off the mark! All the baddies are fictional clones of Nicole!

^ ^ No pressure then ;)

Maybe it was just something she ate EDIT: If Jack dies I will not be held responsible for my actions... On a lighter note, great chapter

Bad Julia, bad! Will Jack and Martha ever have an easy ride? Great chapters

Lol! Thanks. Theres another twist coming up actually.. lol After twist....ahh.. *falls over*

This story is just twist after twist after twist... *Getting dizzy, sits down* You really know how to keep us in suspense don't you! Fantastic chapters as usual, please update soon

Too many good Jack and Martha fanfics. I'm getting all confused - they're all merging! (well in my head anyway) Great story though, can't wait for the next chapter

Disaster! Leave us in suspense why don't you! I'm only joking Great story so far. Have a nice time wherever you're going...

What a great cliff hanger! Can't wait to read your sequel 'Undercover Cop 2' - Fantatsic name

What bananas! Silly, silly children! Can't wait to see what happens......