-Jade-

Well...not surprised she's losing it really, what with his track record... But Jacky wouldn't do that to Martha. I have to believe that that's true. lol Great chapter - you described Martha's feelings really well. Please please update. NOW.

^ You said it for me. *smiles sweetly*

Erm *clears throat* Where's that update you said would be up soon? Of course I would love for you to write another 10 chapters , but what I would love even more is the next update. Recent chapters have been seriously brill and very amusing. Like Jess, I'm a little bit in love with this. No, scrap that, I'm a lot in love with it. Update asap pllllleeeeeeeaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeee!

Hi dee83 - I've noticed that you're relatively new to the board. Sorry to be a pain but there is a rule about SPAG on this forum and it includes the fact that you're not allowed to write in text speak. If you could just remember to write without using text speak abbrieviations next time you post then that would be great. Sorry to be so annoying it's just part of the rules, so I thought I'd alert you to it! And Rach - brilliant fic as always. Please please update!!! It's been too long...

Awwwww yay!!! That was so adorable!! Jacky loves Martha! Wahay!!! *jumps up and down* Now he just needs to let Martha know that she's the only one for him, that no one else would ever compare and that she's amazing... But I have one problem... Why would you cut the chapter in half?!!!! You need to stop doing that, it's really painful when I know that there's another bit already written that I can't read on your computer! Because you love me , do you think you could update again now with the second half of the chapter?! I'd be your friend. (You know you want one, since you don't have any... ) Just kidding Rach. Oops supposed to be nice to you to, so that you update, aren't I? You're brilliant and wonderful. Please update. *grins* (Don't get scared.)

I need a chapter. Hear that Rach?

Arghhhhhh, JACK!!! You pathetic man. Let me tell you a few things (hope you're listening Rach )... 1. Lily is pathetic, obsessive and stupid. She needs to GO, and you need to stop granting her every wish and falling for her stupid excuses. 2. Stop making it up to Martha for ditching her for Lily (even though, I swear, if my memory is correct, that it was indeed Martha who you actually invited on the trip) and then doing the same thing all over again! 3. And you know what? I had a lot more to say but it's just left my brain. lol 4. Oh yea, start treating Martha like she actually means something to you. Idiot. As you can see, wasn't particularly happy with Jack there....or Rachel for that matter since you're writing the damn thing. BUT, other than those 'issues', I'm loving the fic. It's great and it's original, seriously brill writing (wouldn't expect any less from you) and even though I don't always comment (erm, more like never) I do read it and I it. Great stuff Rach! *thumbs up*

Update! Update! Update! *chants and stamps feet*

:wub: :wub: I think that is all I can say. That just might have to be the cutest J&M chapter I've ever read. And they're not even together! How the hell is that possible!? Total brilliance, Rach. Please update asap.

Awwww, Rach! I've missed you! Welcome back - hope your had a great holiday! Meet lots of Italian guys? *wiggles eyebrows* Anyways, brilliant chapter. As always. I how you write J&M's relationship. Even though they're not an item, I love the fact that Martha's the most important girl in Jack's life. It's so cute. I just love everything about this fic. It's awesome. And Tash fancies Jack! Hard not to really. Tell her to keep her hands off.

Awwwwwwwwww :wub: Seriously that was just adorable. I LOVE this Jack and Martha - they're brill Rach. The right amount of cute/adorable with the right amount of humour and cheekiness. Great stuff. As always you're writing was great - it really captured the moment. Please update asap!! (I'll be waiting at my computer. )

Well, no change in opinion from me. I still think that this is great. It's just the way you write Jack and Martha... it's perfect. Even though they're not together, I love the fact that Martha is way more important to Jack than any other girl is or could be. Erm, including the one night stands. You write this so well, and you really do make it funny, I haven't read one chapter yet without laughing out loud at the computer screen (I'm not crazy, dont worry ). Anyways, keep it up, and please please update asap!

Jack and Martha. They're just great. I love all the teasing, I also love your brilliant grammar Rach . The relationship dynamics are really brill - an original take on the friendship. I can't wait to see how it unravels... Please update soon!

Rach I LOVE IT!!!!! Aww this is great, I have a feeling that I'm really gonna enjoy this. I love how you've written the dynamics of their relationship already.. Although I am in no doubt that further along the track I will be pulling my hair out at you blurring the friendship/relationship line , right now it's a great twist and something different. Your writing was really good in this - you did the dialogue very well and I also loved the humour. You gave me a few good laughs there Rach! Whoever knew you had it in you to be funny...?! I seriously can't wait til the next chapter, please post asap and put me out of my misery. Oh yea, and thanks for changing the word. Made it easier for my small brain with it's limited vocab to understand.

Head get a bit big did it Rach?

lol! That's funny Rach, well done. Only thing wrong with your whole 'theory' is that I have nothing to be jealous of, because I know it's not true, no matter how much you're trying to convince yourself that is. (Just messing Rach, you know I love your writing. )

Well that's a huge compliment! Enjoy it Rach - I know you don't get many...

:wub: Ok, so I used up practically all of the available smileys, but it was worth it, because that was adorable. The proposal took me by surprise! Very, erm, quick, but totally romantic. All I can say now is... HA HA HUGH!!! Fabulous writing Rach, I really can't wait til the next story - don't leave it too long! Oh yea, and one other thing, you make me laugh. Near the beggining you put 'know' instead of 'no', and later on you put 'no' instead of 'know'. I think you'll get what I mean.

Awww - it's nearly the end. How sad. But on the bright side J&M are being adorable. Wow, Jack really worships that girl. lol The number of references to 'angels' when he looks at her! Well, it's sweet. Can't wait for the last chapter (but at the same time I really can, since I don't want it to end) - I know it'll be great. You better be writing another fic after this Rach or I'll come after you. Be warned.

Don't stress Rach - we knew what you meant...