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-Jade-

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  1. Well, I'm sure you know what I think since I reviewed, lol, but I will use this oppurtunity to tell you (again) how much I enjoyed reading this story. Writing was brilliant. However, you asked for comments/criticisms so thats what I will give. If I had to be really picky (and I mean really picky) then I would say that in some parts it was slightly repetitive. Also, despite the fact that not all the couples seemed to actually have any great connection with Sally (i.e. Tasha and Robbie) I loved the bits with the different couples. It gave structure to the story. I really can't fault this story to be honest.
  2. You're damn right we are! That was not fair! How could you do that to us?? You better update soon to make up for it. And did I mention... they sure as hell better kiss or I'll come after you. Just a friendly warning!
  3. Yes - thank me people!! lol Only joking. But I am so glad that you changed it because it was just too sad with both couples breaking up! Loved the ending Nicole - it was perfect. And I loved the humour in it. All in all that was one fantabulous fic and I loved every minute of reading it. Well done Nicole!
  4. Awwwwwwwwwwww! lol I loved that chapter - very sweet. Can't wait for the next update!
  5. Go on Robbie!! You tell her. Aww poor Martha Please please update asap!!!
  6. I totally agree with everyone else. I'm with Kase on this one - it wasn't too explicit but it made an impact. I think you wrote with depth but also sensitivity and to me that chapter was perfect. Not one time did I feel uncomfortable but I did feel sadness and despair for Mathilda. It was brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter!
  7. What can I say? That was terrible Nicole. Nah, of course I'm only joking. Brilliant as usual Nicole, please update ASAP!!
  8. calling you? :S
  9. WAHAY you're back! Celebrate! lol! Great to have you back xxNicolexx - it was pretty weird being you for two weeks. You haven't lost your talent to ramble I see, but hey, half of the rambling mentioned me so I'm good with that. Oh no I think my head is starting to get as big as yours. Anyways, even though you were in Portugal I could still read your mind and all that so I left it at chapter 4 on purpose (obviously) . Cos I'm great! (And the head just keeps getting bigger, nothing to rival yours though ). Well I've obviously read the whole story and it's great, really fantastic, but I can't wait to see how you change it!
  10. Brilliant Jess! I love it! Can't wait for the next update!
  11. Yup I agree ^^. Jess, I swear I get boring saying this all the time, but your writing is seriously amazing and that was hot. I'm loving this pairing even more now and as Kase said you portray their characters so well. You're actually making me like Belle and her stubborn nature, despite the fact that she pisses me off in the show. You have talent and you better not stop writing. But then again, I don't think you sould stop writing. Please update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting for the next installment or sin.
  12. Fantastic chapter!!! Please update ASAP!
  13. Well what can I say? You know I love your stories Jess and this is no different. I'm loving the chemistry between Belle and Drew at the moment and I'm not really surprised that you wrote about them. I was kinda expecting you to. Fantastic writing as always - please update as soon as possible!
  14. Please update!!! Martha has to give in!
  15. Please please please update ASAP!!! Great chapter!
  16. LOL. I'm glad you put that in there. I remember the self control thing from Complicated Love. Stuff Megan! God she needs to die! Please update soon. I'm glad you picked up on the self control thing. I was wondering if anyone would remember. Yup. That line reminded me of the self control bit in Complicated Love as well. I'm just hoping that she doesn't have self control though. Great chapter! Please update ASAP!
  17. You HAVE to update!! PLEASE!!!
  18. Great chapter! I really can't wait for the next one!!! Please update ASAP!
  19. I don't like Jack and Kit!! It just doesn't feel right. It is original and different, but I way prefer Jack and Martha. Anyways great chapter as always. Please update ASAP!
  20. As always great chapter and fab writing!! Please update ASAP!!!
  21. Ric's seen Belle and Henry hasn't he?? Great chapter! I'm actually loving Henry and Belle, but not Jack and Kit. It's just not right. lol Fabulous Writing. Please update ASAP!
  22. READ THIS! (Sorry- had to get your attention somehow! ) Well, Nicole has officially gone on holiday for two weeks, but don't worry! lol She's sent me her fic and I'm going to post the chapters through her account over the time that she's away, so you'll still all get to read it. Because it has all been written already the updates should be pretty consistent but I won't be posting them every day or anything. Expect an update every two to three days!
  23. Lol, don't get too full of yourself! Hehehe lol! No way! I thought it was quite rubbish actually.
  24. Thank you to everyone for the lovely and encouraging reviews! I'm quite amazed that I actually made people cry. lol
  25. Amazing fic!! Truly fantastic writing! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!
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