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Aww, i thought it had been updated! And now I find out that I have to wait that long!! Oh well, have a good time! I can't wait to read the next bit!

That was really good! even if I don't like the idea of jack being a murderer at all. This story better have a good ending Dolly....I have my knives at the ready and i know where you live... lol Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very good!!! Come on Lucas....do something!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update!!!

Wow that was great! Very unexpected twist! Please update ASAP!!!

OMG that was great! I feel sad for Jack though Come on Martha needs to be saved now!! It feels like she's been in that house for years! lol Fantastic writing as usual! I loved the way you explained how jack was feeling - very emotinal. God Corey is such a loony. Please update ASAP!!!

I would swear but i'm not allowed. OMG!!!!!!!!! :o I can't believe you have done that!!!!!!!!!! I don't think I can read it anymore...I'm warning you this better have a happy ending.... Jack? A murderer? Jack and Martha? Just friends?? It's all wrong...wrong wrong wrong.

Count me in! I wouldn't mind using a chain saw on Callum! He really is mad, and I'm sure Nicole wouldn't have it any other way! lol Nicole hurry up and write please!! And be nice...

I'm back from holiday!! Fantastic chapters Nicole!! Can't wait to read more!

Me too!! It's really not fair.... You have to update soon now!

Awww that was just really really sweet! As always the writing is fantastic! I'm so glad that they are happy...for the moment! Soooo...was it hard writing a happy scene for once?? lol can't wait for the next chapter!!

I agree with jackandmarthaluver, you have real talent - that was very well written! Great chapter but I'm not too happy about the Megan and daughter bit! It seems like everyone is out to split Jack and Martha up at the moment!! Anyways can't wait for the next chapter!!

OH-MY-GOD!!!!! Jessica was working with Corey?! What a pair of psychos! I can't believe she stabbed Martha!! Jack come help her...quick!!!! Great writing, fantastic plot! Please update asap!!!

god all the J&M writers on this board are deliberately trying to stress me out aren't they?!? lol great chapter, but nooo martha don't believe Jessica! She's evil... lol Please please update soon!

hehe I'm a nutter???? no no no Nicole is absolutely bonkers. I'm no competition. lol and yes i am "OMG-ish" right now. So backtothebayrules update to stop me from going mad!!! (see the !!!'s and the ???'s backtothebayrules? *hint hint update hint hint*)

Jessica, just turn away now... lol Update soon!!

:o Do you know what I did when I finished that?? I started screaming. and my mum called up to me and said "are you OK? You sound like you are in excrutiating pain." And i replied "I am". lol Honest, that is what actually happened. *calms down* No I can't calm down. What the hell has Martha done??? How could you write THAT into the story!!! You better not keep me waiting for the next part otherwise you're in huge trouble!

My god Nicole...how much do you write???? lol Loving the fic Dolly, please update soon!!!

Yay!!! I'm so glad that you've started posting this - i've been looking forward to it! If it's anywhere near as good as Complicated Love, which i know it will be, then i'm going to be hooked. In fact i'm already hooked and also intrigued about the secret... Great chapter, really well written and very sweet! Can't wait for more so please post asap!!!! yay i'm the first post!! lol

Me too! I really can''t wait to see his reaction! lol Please update really really soon!

OMG! Wow what an exciting chapter! I'm hoping that Martha gets out of there unharmed! And funnily enough, like Nicole, i'm kinda feeling sorry for serena as well...lol. Please update asap!

All i can say is what an intruiguing and explosive start! You have real talent for not only writing but also making up all these fab plots! I don't know you do it! Please update really really soon - i want to see Martha's reaction! Oh yea and one more thing... how could you just leave it there?! Meany...lol

Fantastic chapter! Jack better save Martha soon! oo i really hate Corey... lol

As always fantastic chapters! Can't wait for more! =)

oo I know what Nicole means...reading about jack with serena just feels wrong! lol great chapter though! i hope you update really really soon!

Thank you for all the lovely comments! They make me smile!