-Jade-

awwwwww thanks!

Jack what are you doing?? Get down there and save Martha you idiot! Great chapter! I'm loving this fic! Please please please update ASAP!!!!!

great great great! That's all i can say...lol

OMG i loved it!! That was just the best ending! Awww You've made me happy now!

Fabulous start! Update soon please!

Ok, well i'm shocked and confused right now...lol it is amazingly written and the song was just perfect, but I'm also like crying because they didn't get back together! So you HAVE to write a sequel, you really have to... lol

I don't think you deserve to get the next chapter after what you said about Jack and Rose being suited!!

Ok I lied sorry! I don't have the correct file on this computer so I'll only be able to update tomorrow!

Ok the next update will be posted in like the next ten minutes.

Same here! Fantastic chapter and I'm now just praying that you keep it nice and happy adn that they get back together! Aww Jack and Martha!! lol so sweet!! As much as i want to read the next chapter I'm gonna be sad when this fic is finished because it's been soo good!

That was just too good! Aww Jack going to save her, that's so sweet!!! Please please please update soon soon soon!!

Agree with that! 2) I think it's quite obvious that no matter how you do it, Jack snd Martha need to get back together, if it doesn't happen i will understand but i will cry! (you don't want that on your concience do you) lol!! 3)You have, (like many other writers on this board) talent. Firsrly it's a j&m fic so of course i'm going to read it. Secondly, i'ts very hard to write a fan fiction that is interesting, doesn't give the reader exactly what they want, but also leaves room for hope that the ending they want is going to happen. And thirdly you obviously have a way with words because i can imagine the descriptions as i read them! Well I think jackandmarthaluver and bay girl summed up my feelings there as well. But just to add... firstly i don't hate Rose because she seems nice and she also pulled away second time when Jack was actually up for it () So I'm more angry at Jack! Actually I'm not lol I want to be but I can't be totally angry with him because it's just not possible! However, as bay girl said, kissing your bestfriend's boyfriend is completely wrong and for that Rose is not my favourite person right now! Secondly, I would like to see J&M get back together in the end. I love the fact that right now few things are happening as we would like them to and that's what makes it such a great story, but seriously practically everyone reading this fic wants it to be a happy ending! (let me specify: a happy Jack and Martha ending and that does not mean them as friends it means them together! lol ) Please! oo and let me tell you that if something bad happens at the end, unlike jackandmarthaluver I will not understand! Thirdly, what keeps me reading?? Well on top of the above, the story is different, original and you're a great writer who makes it all seem real and entirely possible. And obviously being a M&J fan I can't not read it! lol And it is one of the best M&J fics around!

linzie_mac01!!!! I'm shocked! You can IMAGINE Jack and rose together?!? You were right when you said that we'd be out to get you!! lol just you wait.. you'll suffer for that comment! And Dolly, you proved your point in that after the storm fic of yours...you don't need to prove it in this one! Please don't make me like cry at the end of this one too! (ok maybe crying is a slight exaggeration but you know what i mean..lol) As i said before I can't wait for the next update!

OH MY GOD!!!! Jack I hate you!!! What do you mean you love Rose??? You love Martha you idiot! There can't be a love triangle because Martha and Jack are MEANT to be together! I can't believe Jack is actually going around kissing another girl! i don't know how else to express my outrage! lol However, to your credit teh story is definitely different and original and you're a great writer. But please don't leave me waiting...update soon please!!!

:o OMG!! Corey's a complete psycho!! Come on jack where are you???? Martha needs you!! Please please write the next chapter soon!

thanks to everyone for their comments! i would be nice and tell you whether they get back together or not in the end but i wanna keep you all guessing! lol

Congratulations on completing your second fic!!!!! Great story - I loved every chapter!!! Don't worry I will write the summary, I just keep forgetting !!! oops lol Will do it tonight.. promise!! anyways I'm looking forward to your next fic a lot!!!! Well done!!!

Exactly!! How could you resist him?? Anyways they had the best of intentions to tell him... lol Fantastic chapter, great writing!! I am really dying to read the next chapter so please update as soon as you possibly can!!

fantastic chapter!!! i hope J&M get back together!!!!! Please update ASAP!

I can only say this in one way.... OH MY GOD!!!!! i don't like warren at all! No i HATE him!!! How can he do that?? Martha go back to jack he'll protect you!!!!! Great writing!! Great story!! i hope you upadte ASAP because I'm dying to know what happens next!!

Very good!! but why is it so sad??? lol continue soon please!

I'm really happy that you decided to do another fic as well! This is sounding great and i'm so curious! Martha what the hell are you doing?? Jack, don't just stand there and get drunk!! lol Anyways cannot wait til the next chapter!!!! and by the way i apologise for nicole above; she rambles on a bit and also has an overactive imagination (army of small people??) lol but she was right when she said update tonight!

please update soon!!! i've read those fics! They really are great so read them!!

I agree with you there!

ok i need everyone's HONEST opinion. I have actually finished this fic i just haven't posted it all lol but anyways, I was going to stop writing fics after this but then nicole was pestering me and said that I couldn't stop. What i need to know is should i write another one or not?