-Jade-

OMG! Great chapter...what's gonna happen???

Fabulous story and very sweet at the end!! Hope I will read more of your fics soon!!

Loving the fic Nicole!!! Post again soon!! Martha and Jack have got to get their acts together!!! lol

When I first wrote julia into the story i knew she was horrible but i didn't think that she was going to be hated this much! lol It seems you all feel passionately about it! Will update later tonight hopefully!

Omg!! Noooo I can't believe you left it like that!!!! What has Corey done??? you HAVE to update ASAP because you can't just leave it like this!

Fantastic as usual! I love this fic!

I Love this fic!! Great writing Nicole and very original story!!! Please write more soon!

No need to state the obvious Nicole!

That was GREAT...please please please update tonight!!!!

Ooooo that was sooo good!!! Great writing and action-packed story! Please update as soon as you possibly can!!!

Good start! please update soon!

That chapter was GREAT!!! I'm really intrigued....what is Corey going to do?? Please update ASAP!

Great chapter as usual Nicole!!!

Pleae update soon!!!

Yea, same here Nicole, i almost started feeling sorry for corey to, but hey Jack and Martha make such a good couple that after a while Corey doesn't really matter after all...lol. Anyway great chapter Bay girl!! Well written - I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Ok, well I'm going away for 5 days so i'm afraid there will be no more updates until i get back!! Sorry!!

I will update later today in the evening for anyone who wants to know!!!

Thanks Nicole!!

Yes...but he is tricking her...am not sure how she's gonna feel about that!! lol Anyways you will have to wait til the next part to find out! lol

Loving this!!! Please update ASAP!!

Thanks! Will update soon!

OMG sooo good! Please update like now!!!!

Thank You for all the positive reviews!!! Make sure you check out the sequel: "Split", the first part has been posted!!! Thanks! jackandmartha!!! xoxox

well i was going topost the next part tommorow but should I post now?

Very very good!!!!!But when will they realise that they are meant for one another?!?Great writing Nicole!!!