-Jade-

That was really sweet. Jack's so cute, Martha's one lucky girl. Please update soon Rach. You know you want to! Well that could only mean one thing...

Erm. *clears throat* Where's the update, Rach?

I know I am. *smug face* Anyways, on to the review... I know that I say this everytime but... aww Jacky. He loves her! He loves her! That was really adorable - the way that she couldn't get rid of the 'nightmares' without him around. And that chapter wasn't even bad! You're a bit stupid sometimes. Oh yea, and a 'Jade World Record' people - I managed to comment on two chapters in a row. That's quite am achievement considering that I don't comment ever a lot. *nods impressively* You should be proud of me Rach.

You idiot. You kept saying in msn that you weren't happy with the chapter and that it was boring. I didn't you believe of course, but I didn't get my hopes up. Then it turns out to be amazing. And so romantic. And bittersweet (my favourite thing when it comes to romance in fics ). What a brilliant chapter. You couldn't have been more wrong. And awww Jacky. Please update very very soon.

You had to leave it there, didn't you?! How could you do that to me? Come on Jack - you can do it!! Faster! Faster! I hope he realises that Martha was only kissing Hugh because she has to. Don't be upset Jacky. Great chapter, and you did action very well! Please update. Preferably now.

Please update. I want to find out if you've decided to be horrible or nice. And a little message for Jacky: Find her you idiot!

Right...long post coming through!!!! Firstly wanted to say... HAPPY BIRTHDAY RACHEL!!!! Hope you've had a great day. Secondly, wow! How good is this getting? I love it. I know I haven't commented at all a lot, but it wasn't because I haven't been reading! Partly, I've been busy and away a lot, partly, I'm just lazy. But seriously, this is getting really good - I know you were slightly unsure at one point about it but it's getting really juicy now. Having the two plots running alongside simultaneously is making it really interesting. Now, the problem I'm having really is that J&M are obviously made for each other. But deep down... you know, deep deep down there, I'm still harbouring some Martha-hate. It's not good. And this goes against my natural inclination, but I almost want Jack to say no to Martha. Because she hurt him so badly. In fact, I just kinda want to step into the story and give him a big hug. Figured that it wouldn't be a great idea to stick my foot through the monitor though. lol Anyways, as always, excellent writing, brilliant in fact. AND some gloriously long chapters. AND regular updates. (It's great - since I keep going away for a few days at a time, I always come back to loads of chapters.) I mean what more could I want? Oh yea, that's right, Hugh to go away. Please update asap. (They still don't let you use enough damn smilies in these posts. )

Hey Rach. Sorry I haven't commented on this a lot really, just been finishing off my exams and celebrating and stuff -so I've been a bit busy. But I will start commenting properly very soon! Promise. xx

You're crazy.

Where's my update, Rach?

ME! Evil!!! Yes, you. Now, why don't I believe that...?

Rach is corrupted and she's evil, Becky ()... I don't think there's anything we can do.

Omg, can't believe I never even realised that you had posted your new fic! What a great surprise. WAHAY!!!! I haven't had to survive too long without your fics so it's all good. :cool: What a great and very intriguing start. I love the way your fics are really different - the plot's always original and I'm really loving this already. Great stuff! Jack sounds adorable. It makes me sad to think of people not thinking he's good enough. Poor Jacky. But he has the hottest girl in school - if Martha can see the cute and nice Jack, then that's all that matters. Yet again you have made them into an unimaginably sweet couple (although I have no doubts that you will ruin this at some point ) Otherwise great start and please please update soon!

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