-Jade-

I have nothing to say to you.

Brilliant ending - very romantic, I like the way yo built it up but didn't take it too far. Excellent one shot. More more more (oneshots) from you please!

Martha hasn't been given a chance though! She's barely been written about. Why are you guys all turning against her?! Traitors. We all know Jack's an idiot and Becky's evil, but we haven't actually really seen anything of Martha, so give the poor girl a chance!

WAHAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dances* A new chapter! You've just made me a very happy girl Amber. ;) Just had to express my excitement - now I shall go and read it, and edit this post with my comments. EDIT: Ok, well I can't say I'm too pleased about the whole woman wanting Martha dead thing. (Who is she?!) And I'm not too pleased about the spoilers either - knowing you, it'll just be Martha pushing Jack away some more. *sighs* Are we never gonna get them back? But other than that, the chapter was brill! As always, you wrote Jack and Martha so well. Can't wait for the next installment!

I refuse to read this if it keeps on going like this, because it makes me sad. Great writing though.

J&M better have a nice looong chat. It's well overdue and they need to be honest with each other. You get that Amber? A nice chat. So true! Thanks for the update. Great chapter Amber, please update when you can.