-Jade-

^ Same.

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this fic. This has to be one of the funiest and best one shots I've ever read. The plot is really good - loving the cyclical structure. The characterisation of Colleen is just spot on and her obssession is hilarious. Writing is brilliant as always. I shall now proceed to choose some of my fav bits. Though with every free muffin that was given, so was a piece of her heart. The compliments that he gave about the double chocolate muffins grew personal to Colleen, and each word of them made her heart flutter. They were words of love to her ears, and she memorised each one. lmao! “That was really great Colleen.†She recited with a smile as she placed a muffin onto the plate. “I’d love to get fat on your muffins.†She added as she rubbed her hands clean onto her apron. From where she was stood, she could still make out every curve of every muscle on his upper body. She swallowed down a giggle of delight that had formed in her throat, and began to walk from the kitchen area with an order in each hand. Only you could say that. She didn’t take her eyes off Jack, with every small step she took with her tired legs she thought of a reason for why she loved him. One was his hair, the way he wore it rugged and scruffy; like a real man. Every time she laid eyes on his dark matted head gear her fingers began to itch with curiosity, wondering what it would feel like to run her fingers through the jungle of hair. That was disturbing, but hilarious all the same. The only thing that kept her connected to the world was the plate in her right hand, and her determination to stop his muffin touching the floor. Falls off chair - brilliant. I could go on but I haven't got time to keep picking bits out.... Maybe I should have just copied and pasted the whole fic... Hmmm Really really brill Nicole. EDIT: Poor Peter. lol

Sorry to hear about your loss. Obviously no pressure with the updates. This fic is just . That's all I can say.

Cindy?? lol

Nicole is blind. Great chapter though Nic, shame the title kinda ruined it.

Ohh dear, Jack's not happy. That whole arranging a date for Jack with someone else, and consequently Martha going out with someone else, felt weird. Although the girl seemed acbsolutely fine, the whole idea of it actually made me cringe. Why would Martha do that to Jack? Poor him. Martha better be super jealous now. Fantastic writing, as always. Please update soon.

That better be a J&M date, otherwise I'll come and get you Amber. Aww, the chapter before the last was amazingly sweet, and thsi chapter was just yey, cos Martha's falling in looovvve. Can't wait for the next chapter. Fabulous writing so far.

Reall fantastic writing, I would love to give this a longer review but I'm currently busy dong something. But just thought that you wrote thatt so beautifully - you have real talent, hope to see more from you.

That was cruel. All I can say is.. Poor Jack. I want to give him a hug now.

Awwwww their first kiss - I think we all remember that scene! Absolutely LOVED that chapter Amber. Poor confused Martha but it's simple really.. all she has to do is get with Jack and all will be fine. Can't wait until the next chapter! Please update asap!

And I thought the fanfic forum couldn't get any more organised! I'm proven wrong. lol Great idea, I guess now it'll motivate me to actually update my fic!

lmao, well we all know what Rachel's got on her mind then. Great chapter - am happy they kissed.

^ My feelings exactly - how can they be so mean to her?! What she's doing for them, is so that they can be together... (right?), so why are they denying her Jack. Please update as soon as you possibly can.

Awww, what a shame. Well i'll just have to savour what's left of this fic then! YAY! Long chapter! Long chapter = good Can't wait for tomorrow morning now!

Right, just read all of this and I think it's brill! You're a really good writer and I can't wait to see more from you, cos I know you'll develop loads - you should try writing some one shots (I would so read them - unless you have and i missed them let me know ). Anyways, I really enjoyed reading it, the plot's great, everything's great, but.... Ruth! What the hell? How could she do that?! What a cow. Martha better not blame Jack. You better update soon Tasha, otherwise you're dead. Ok, ok, I'm not exactly in a position to make threats about updating. I'll just leave you with this... Please update as soon as you possibly can. *innocent face* *waits desperately at computer*