-Jade-

Right, I better keep to my promise of posting comments. I thought that last chapter was totally fab!! Omg, you could so just feel the chemistry! Shame about that Eamon guy. I wish he'd just...go away. lol Please please update soon, and I'm not at all happy that you took something out.

lol, firstly, I can't believe you left it there. Secondly, that was so sweet, how she was looking at all the photos and stuff. Thirdly, yay! She's decided to move in. And fourthly, this should be interesting... and funny. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Well, as you know Krys, I absolutely LOVED this one shot. It's just so dark and really gets into Martha's thoughts. Your writing was absolutely fantastic and you managed to make me feel sorry for Martha at the same time as thinking that she deserved all she got . I don't know quite what it was in this one shot that got me hooked, but it was definitely something because I couldn't stop reading right from the first sentence. Well, I only stopped because you were interrupting me. I think that has to be one of your best yet. *claps* Can't wait for more from you. *hint hint* It may be a one shot, but maybe a series of one shots that follow on from each other wouldn't be a bad thing....

What a quote, so totally summed the chapter up and what a chapter it was. The tension, the chemistry, the spoken words, the heat...phenomenal writing Jess, really good. I didn't get a kiss though, just a sense that they both were very close to it. Anyway I'm not going to rabbit on coz I could be here forever praising this chapter. It was wicked, I loved it, great writing. As you know, I couldn't agree more with everything Kat said. Really the only word I could use to describe this chapter (apart from amazing ) is bittersweet - and it was amazing how you created that feeling. Can't wait for the next one Jess.

Fab chapter! I loved the whole convo between Jack and Martha - funny as usual. But I also feel very sorry for Jack - he's obviously in denial... Great writing Nicole. I can't wait for the pure JMness in the next chapter!!! Please update soon.

Great one shot! I just wish that would happen on h&A!

Right, I'm really bad at not posting comments even though I actually do read this fic religiously so I'm going to really try from now on. I love this fic and I loved that chapter! My favourite bit of course was where Eamon's parents go all over the top - I'm surprised at just how much more patient martha seems (must be a reflection of her relationship with Eamon Nah, I'm just kidding, J&M are a way better couple... move over Eamon). I found the bit about the tackiness really funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now I'm out of whole reviewing situation, I have to say that this was one of my faves but obviously I had to be fair and judge based on the prompts and writing etc.... A great J&M fic is such a pleasure to read -I loved every minute of it. This was fab!

Really really good entry. Now that I'm out of my 'reviewing mode' I can really appreciate the story for what it is. I loved reading it, and I loved how you used Kit and the descriptions were really good! Especially the 'heaven and hell in a bottle' one. Great job!

Just had to come in here and show some love for this chapter. As you said Jess, probably one of, if not the best Ric/Cassie chapter to date. Loved the togetherness but also the way that you showed that they weren't totally perfect but just right for each other nevertheless. The strong friendship bond that Cassie and Mattie have was also apparent, and the whole 'hoes over bros' thing did run subtly through it. Even though Ric is obviously perfect for her. That was too sweet.

You have no idea how much I needed to read fic like that! That was so great - brilliant plot and fantastic writing! Thank You.

Fab chapter Nicole as always!! And I also like the new format.

You know what, I actually didn't think that Sara had gone from sweet to bitch - it came across to me that she was just naive and annoying.

Great chapter Jess, as always!

Seriously Kat, don't feel guilty, take your time!

lol, I like them together. *waits for attack*

Is it even possible to hate Hayley any more than I do now? lol Wow, what a bitch. but I'm sure it's not what we think it is right? Martha's probably got the wrong idea... I'm hoping. Excellent chapter and fantastic writing by ILM and SKYKAT - I mean who can beat that combination? lol I know you're having major writer's block Skykat so don't panic about getting the next chapter up - just whenever you get the inspiration. But don't worry - you won't loose any readers; this fic is just too good to ignore.

Well firstly awww poor Carl! I like him now because he was so nice! I feel bad for him. And awww poor Jack! And argghhh what is wrong with Martha?!?? Stupid woman. Another great chapter and don't worry about the whole missing out Carl finding out about the baby thing - I still got what was happening. Please update ASAP!

I think it;s my evilness shining through. lol. Well, I'm all for Martha hate - I'm really not liking her in h&A right now. But, I'm so glad that you're back online and that chapter was, as always fantastic! Please update as soon as you can!

Just read all of this from the start Kat and it's fantastic. I love the characters and I love bitchy Hayley with Martha and Cassie as her slaves. lol The way you've created and mixed all the relationships is great! I love Kit and Noah, Martha and Cassie, the boy's relationships - everything is just interconnected and complicated, but still unstandable and enjoyable to read. I can't believe I didn't start reading this earlier. Please please update as soon as you can!

Like hell you do.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it - your comments are really appreciated!

Same here - real feel good movie. Meryl Streep was brilliant.

YAY! I managed to find a computer in my hotel that has internet! *cheers* Jess, you're too nice, the reason this chapter was so late is because I didn't get around to proofing it for like ages. Yea I had some computer problems with coursework and files being lost, but seriously, it was late because of me. Fantastic chapter Jess as always!

^^ Longest sentence ever! No, seriously, that chapter was just too adorable for words! So sweet. That breakfast has made me start craving french toast. Damn you . lol Please please update soon!