Jacksthehottest

Brilliant chapters once again. That was pretty action packed lol. Glad it sort of turned out alright. Make Martha make it through the night oh and also Hugh, so that he can watch Jack be with Martha Please update soon, can't wait for more

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one, hopefully it ends happy. Poor Jack, he had to see that I hate Hugh! Please update soon, can't wait for more

Aww that was so sad. Brilliant writing on all the chapters Please update soon, can't wait for more

I havn't commeneted on this fic in ages But i have been reading it Brilliant chapters all of them I feel sorry for Martha, even though she cheated on Jack ages ago Nooo not Hugh, Martha better run away from him Please update soon can't wait for more

Brilliant writing, you write the JM interaction really well I loved that chapter, they argued again lol, but atleast they talked Please update soon, can't wait for more

Jamie has a boyfriend, that means she doesn't want Jack He might just have to go for other girls to make Martha jelouse She doesn't deserve him just yet lol Great chapter, please update soon, can't wait for more

Great chapter For some reason i don't like Jaime liking Jack anymore lol But they need to make Martha jelouse Please update soon

You can't just end the chapter there lol. It's probably Martha Please update soon, can't wait for more

About time she got caught. What a bitch. Poor Jack, i like Jamie she should be with Jack. Martha does not deserve anyone except for Hugh Great chapter Please update soon

I havn't commeneted on this fic yet . I love it its good to see you starting a new fic. Martha what is she doing. Poor Jacky, he deserves so much better. Martha can go and stay with Hugh Please update soon, can't wait to read more

It's good to see that the fic is back Loved the two chapters. The Holden boys are so funny. Poor Martha Don't get married Please update soon

I hvan't commented this in ages i think lol. Anyways all great chapters except you didn't get them together. It was all going good and then its stuffed up again for Jack and Martha I like the idea, i don't remember who said it, but going to witness protection together that would be good Please update soon, can't wait for more

This is definatley one of my favourite fics. That last chapter was so cute. Eamon better go along with what Martha wants. Please update soon, can't wait for more

LMAO Nicole that was just brilliant and so funny. Probably the funnist one shot i have read. You write Colleen so brilliantly.

AMAZING!!! That was just brilliant. Loved it and the writing was good aswell. Finally something happened between them, so happy now. Please update soon, can't wait to read more

Wow, go Martha. I love this lol. That was an excellent chapter, Jack better comfort her and if Amber will be happy with the next chapter, that means its something good with JM, hopefully. Please update soon, i can't wait to read more

Awww that was so cute, the dancing bit aww, Jacks so sweet. As for Eamon and Richard they are loosers, who need to leave Martha and Jack alone. Please update soon

Lmao so many bits of that chapter made me laugh. Loved the ringtone . Can't Eamon and Richard just leave and live somehwere far far away. Great chapters, please update soon

Awww, that was so cute. I love how you write Jack and Martha. Lol Martha needs chocolate, so do i . Eamon seems kind of nice. Please update soon, can't wait to read more

Awwwwwww, who needs a kiss when you can just read JM cuteness. Nicole that was perfect, they are so cute. Only if Eamon didn't exist it would be all good. Please update soon, can't wait for more