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Awwwww i loved that chapter Nicole. That was so cute how Martha was holding onto him. You deleted the kiss didn't you? so mean lol. Can't wait for more, please update soon

awww. I love how you write Jack and Martha here. They are so cute. Fishing? seems fun lol, can't wait for the next chapter Please update soon

Awwwwwwww i loved that chapter. Martha and Jack were so funny. Brilliant writing, please update soon, looking forward to more

aww I loved the scene between Martha and Jack, can't wait till next chapter. I also want to find out what happened to Jack when he was away. Brilliant writing Nicole, please update soon

Me too. Nicole great chapter thankyou for updating. We need more J/M scenes and poor Jack. Brilliant writing though, please update soon, can't wait to read more

Wow brilliant writing, loved the flashback, poor Jack. Please update soon, can't wait to read more

Yay Thankyou for updating Nicole, Love that chapter you had me laughing so many times. But Poor Jack Love that line aswell hehe . Please update soon can't wait to read more

The end? noo it can't end, but atleast Jack and Martha got togther at the end well sort of. Excellent fic, hope to see more J/M fics from you. Amazing writing

awww awww awww awww loved that chapter Dolly, Martha and Jack are so cute and cheeky. Jesse got caught hehe Matilda and Lucas interupted them, that was funny, amazing writing. Can't wait for more please update soon

Great 2 chapters, Jack can't die please update soon

Welcome Back, Great Chapter, can't wait to read more

lol ^ i just caught up on all the chapters exellent writing. Jack is dying Noo that can't happen save him somehow, please update soon

awwww poor Jack the guy deserves to be happy. Really don't like Eamon, get Martha back with Jack, she knows she wants him. Please update soon

lol he really did sound gay, maybe he is gay but just going out with Martha so people won't know . Great chapter Nicole a drunk Rachel . please update soon

Excelent chapter, glad Jack is moving on, that was so cute. Hope nothing bad happens to Martha, please update soon

Yay excellent chapter Nicole, loved the Jack and Lucas part, so cute. Can't wait for more, please update soon

Nicole that was an excellent chapter, you had me laughing so many times. Jack, Rob and Kim are halarious you write it so well. Martha still loves Jack, she does its obvious, poor Jack. I love long chapters, can't wait for another, please update soon and have fun in Belgium

wow Great chapter Nicole, that nearly made me cry. It was sad but in a good way. I still feel sorry for Jack, but atleast him and Martha arn't arguing. Great writitng. It looks like sian is the only one that likes Eamon lol. Hope you do update soon can't wait to read more

Poor Jack, the guy is hurting. Stupid Eamon he has no reason to say that to him, i agree with what Amber just said, if Martha really did love Jack, then she wouldn't have moved on. Why can't Jack cry instead of letting all his anger out lol. I blame Martha in all of this, she continues to annoy me. Please update soon, that chapter was fantastic.

Lara is safe yay But Poor Jack, overall great chapter can't wait to read more

Poor Jack, why can't Eamon just get lost. Great chapter though. Can't wait for the next one, please update soon

Ooo can't wait for the talk, that was a great chapter Nicole. Loving Lucas and Jack they are so cute. Please update soon

Awwwww that was excellent, You are an amzing writer and you should definatley write more fics. The way you descrive the surronding and everything is perfect. Can't believe Jack died but it was beautifully written. Hope to see more fics from you

yay that made me happy, loved the j and m bits so cute, please update soon can't wait for more

Lol i love Lucas in this fic so cute No you can't make J/M friends, they are more than that. I just read the past 2 chapters. Im not liking Eamon, even though he hasnt done anything wrong. Its weird coz he is the only one in summer bay going to chruch. Please update soon