Jacksthehottest

Great chapter, im hating Hayley more and more. Poor kim, but he's funny lol. Also loving Noah Please update soon

awww poor Jack Why did Martha have to move on and now Jack is pretending not to love her anymore, poor guy. That was great writing Nicole, i feel sorry for Jack, please make things happy. Hope you update soon, can't wait for more

Great Chapter Nicole, and amazing writing. I can't help it by hate Eamon, even if he seems nice. Please update soon

Noooooooooooooooooooo..How could you do that Nicole...poor Jack, but thanx for updating. That chapter was great, can't wait to read more

That was excellent and i thought it was impossible to hate Hayley even more, guess i was wrong. Fab Chapter please update soon

wow i just realised you updated, Thankyou that was great, can't believe Martha and Jack argued again it's all Hayelys fault. I actually like Noah and Kit together. wow someone is a bit up themseleves, who does she thinks she is lol Great chapter please update soon

I'll try and write a chapter now, so it will probably be up tomorrow morning

yay yay an update, i love this fic it's really intresting. Hahaha Hayley's angry and it's funny. Poor Martha and Cassie is talking to Kane yay I especially loved the scenes with Martha and Jack they were so cute and i also like the friendship with Will and Jack and Martha and Cassie Excellent chapter please update soon

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Wow, your doing a great job of writing Hayleys charecter hahah not suprised that everyone hates her. Poor Martha. Hope to read more, please update soon

yay i was so excited to see an update OMG so close....only if Colleen didn't come. But the whole discription beofre the kiss was excellent. Loved it. and the whole chapter was great, i wonder what Martha is hiding. Please update soon can't wait for more

Wow excellent chapter, that was really good. I'm loving the Cassie and Mattie friendship it's so awesome and seems real. Also i personaly like Cassie in your fic better than on the show and same with Mattie. But just one question who's Matthew and Belle, am i missing something. Or was there storys before this one? Anyways your doing a great job, please update soon can't wait for more

awwww, awwwww that was so cute and sweet. I'm glad it was only Martha and Jack in that chapter. But i still want to know what Martha's hiding, it better not be something bad, but at least she still loves Jack. hahah that made me laugh, that was excellent Nicole. Please update soon i can't wait to read more

Wow that was excellent, you made me laguh so many times during that chapter. I wonder why Jack isn't talking about where he has been. Now this whole thing with Martha better be revealed soon, coz I'm dying to know what it is. I would guess but i would probably be miles off Please update soon, don't keep us waiting too long. Great chapter and fantastic writing.

Wow...that was AMAZING. how do you manage to write these things, it's excellent. I also like the whole Mattie/Ric and Lucas/Belle pairings. Lol and i love Matilda drunk she is halarious and Belle is just Belle. Great story and excellent writing.

awww that was a great chapter, i loved it. I really like these pairings in your story. Please update soon can't wait to read more

Great chapter Lucas and Jack are so cute please update soon

OMG OMG he is alive yay please please please update like now, i can't wait to rerad more and also i can't wait to see Martha's reaction,

wow you make it sound so good lol. Anyways great chapter, that was excellent writing but sad. Hopefully she isn't married to anyone in the next chapter and also hopefully Jack comes back (even though that is impossible ). Please update soon can't wait for more

lol your doing a great job of making everyone hate Hayley. Great chapter i can't wait to see what happens at this party, great writing please update soon

wow that was great, i would normally not be intrested in a fic about this charecters, but you make it sound so good. I love your writing. Can't wait to read more, please update soon

awww that's a great start. Poor Jack and Martha please update soon can't wait to read more, by the way excellent writing.