Jacksthehottest

I love it, your an excellent writer, can't wait to read more please update soon

wow that was an excellent chapter, love the description of him. Also like how the fic is seen from Anna's point of view, please update soon that was great

can't wait to read it, i have read some of you're fics and your an excellent writer, please update

excellent! i love where this is heading, so martha does love Jack wells eh always has and the good thing is she doesn't want to marry Carl yet yay . I loved those two chapters, hope you uodate soon can't wait to read more

awww thats a great start love it, hope you update soon, can't wait to read more, excellent writing

firstly Home&AwayGal, thanx for nagging Nicole to update. Omg i didn't believe Jack was gone, but now he really is, Nicole that's not fair , hows this supposed to be a long fic without Jack. Now to the chapter, that was excellent, especially the way you described everything, you could really tell what it was like. poor Martha, you nearly made me cry. Please update soon this is great can't wait to read more because i have no idea where it will go from here.

awwww..i wasn"t expecting that, but its about time. he should ask her to marry him, i can't wait to read it, that's if he decides to through with it. that was excellent please update soon, can't wait to read nxt chapter

OMG OMG Nicole can't believe you did that, you killed Jack That made me cry, excellent writing Nicole. But please let him be alive somehow, you can't kill him of at the start, not fair. That was an azmazing chapter please update soon, can't wait to read more

awww are you trying to make me cry Martha loves him yay, but probably in a friend type of way, Poor Jack Please update soon that was excellent

that was a great ending, loved it and also the last line was perfect Hope to see you write more fics in the future, because your a great writer.

wow i just caught up aagin, loved it even though Jack died, but that was excellent, it is so discriptive Please update soon

OMG what is Jack doing, , poor Martha glad to know she doesn't die. That was an excellent chapter Nicole, please update soon

WOW this is amazing, i just started reading it, its excellent. I like the Cassie/Henry pairing, better than Cassie and Ric, i also love this new charecter Anna. Your writing is amazing, i can't wait to read more, please update soon

awwwww poor Martha and Jack. I wish Jack would just tell her even thoguh it wont change things, please update soon

Yay yay, thankyou for that, i would have never expected Martha to sleep with Jack, while she was engaged to Carl, loving it, hope the baby is Jack's update soon

aww i just caught up on some chapters, why do i keep falling behind, anyways excellent writing love it. Jack and Lara haha and Jack being like 70, weird. But that last chapter was sad, Poor Jack. Please update soon i love it, can't wait for more

oh you can't just leave it there , please update soon

awwwww Poor Jack, someone get that wedding dress out of there. Please make something good between Martha and Jack happen, please update soon can't wait for more

nice prediction, lol,

awwww:(....poor Jack, why are you doing this?, please update soon

Awww poor Jack, GlowingAngel please get Jack and Martha together you are a J&M fan right? lol please update soon that was great

awwww poor Jack, please update soon

wow Nicole that was excellent, love it. Poor Jack and i loved the bit about ripping the paper, only one problem you have to update now, i really want to see what happens next. Please update soon can't wait for more

i just caught up wih the last 2 chapters, they were brilliant, the dream seemed so real, i coulnd't be happier, but then Jack woke up and relaised it was a dream, damn. Anyways Carl seems nice but she's better with Jack, please update soon can't wait to read more

awww awww awww, what more can i say? that was birlliant, it was sad but you're writing is excellent the way you explain everything make it seem so real. Keep up the fantastic work can't wait to read more please update soon