Jacksthehottest

that was an excellent chapter, sad to see Macca leave, poor Martha. Please update soon that was great

wow excellent start love it, another Jack and Martha fic, but I'm confused who's Rob, i thought she was going out with Carl or did i miss something. Please update soon that was great

wow that was great Nicole, Martha is being unresonable, Jack shouldn't quit his job and she should accept that lol, this better not be heading somehwere bad, you have to keep them happy Nicole. Please update soon, excellent writing

aww that was so cute lol confused, good way to describe it, loved the part at the end as well, please update soon this is great

awww thats so sad, but it was written well, please update soon i can't wait to read more

aww that was an excellent chapter, Martha and Jack are so cute, please update soon

OMG Nicole, that made me cry that was excellent, brilliant, amazing and any other word that describes very good, lol. That was so sweet how Jack was telling her how much he loves her, it made me cry and not much fanfics do. Also i loved the way you described the whole situation with Martha's friend Ben, poor Martha and you better not let the same thing happen to Jack.You're writing is excellent as well, you make it seem so real, both of these chapters have been a great start to your fic, I'm already hooked. Keep up with the happy scenes, Please please update soon , i can't wait to read more

awwww that so sad i want Martha back , can't wait to see what you got planned for this fic, great writing, please update soon

Yay another fic from you, that was an excellent start, so sweet and cute, maybe you should keep it like that , please update soon i can't wait for more

thanx for all your comment, the next chapter will be up tomorrow hopefully

OMG, you did not just kill of Martha, how could you, that nearly made me cry and it was totally un expected. Oh my God great writing though, can't wait for more. maybe magically Martha will appear....."sigh" as if..

Yay Yay Jack's coming home, he isn't going to be in jail anymore, this is so good please update soon

that was great can't wait for more please update soon

great start, your writing is excellent, can't wait for more

wow. never expected Tasha and Robbie to be dead, great fic though i enjoyed reading it

oh that was great Nicole, so sweet and cute and funny,especially the jokes about Colleen. I'm glad they worked it all out, overall this fic has been excellent, i love it, i hope you write more fics soon making sure they are about J and M lol, thanx for finishing that of, excellent writing.

i had a feeling it was going to be Robbie, great chapter can't wait to read more

OMG how come i didnt see you had put up two chapters *cries*, i thought you wouldn't update yet, so i went back and checked and there was two chapters for me to read . That was BRILLIANT, seriously that was really good, you're writing, funny scenes and everything between Martha and Jack. aww it was so cute and sad at times. i really really really can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully Jack and Martha end up together, please update soon i can't wait to read more

wow..that was an amzing chapter Nicole, your writitng is brilliant. I do hope Jack and Martha get back together, but Jack deserves to suffer for a bit more and I'm also glad Robbie left Tash Please update soon, i can't wait to read more

wow never new Tash was like that great chapter Tasha go away noone wants you, please update soon

awww that was so cute, great chpater please update soon

great start love it, go Robbie you yell at Tash

yay I'm glad they are all safe, Go Martha!!! she needs to yell at Jack more, that was great i wish this had happneed on home and away it would have been more exciting. Great writing Nicole please update soon

thankyou for updating Nicole, that was brilliant, I'm glad Jack shouted at Tash, that was so good to read and Tash was finally being a friend to Martha, i hope Jack finds her soon, please update soon great chapter