jacksgurl:)

aww i loved tht chap. It was soo funny lol your so good at writing this!! Last chap:( lol nooo:P well it was a really gd story i loved it all Can't wait to read your next story xx

coool story!! lovin it:D Cnt wait to read more poor jack:( i love jack and martha:)

Wow i love this story! you are soo good at writing this kind of stuff i'm soo hooked! plz update soon i love mac n jack together and the whole colleen knocking at the door is soo typical of her (bless her) neway lovin the story Sian X