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Jack is so caring and such a hero. Great chapter. Please please update soon.

Great chapter, please update soon.

Excellent.

Great once again.

Poor Jack. There maybe a final twist to the truth though lets hope. Great chapter please update soon

How sweet this is such a brilliant chapter I could cry. Please update soon.

Wow this is excellent just when you think it's coming to a end something else pops up. I wonder what Megans game is. Excellent read, please update soon.

Great chapter, maybe Jack could go with Martha and he could get a job at the local cop station. " and they all live happily ever after" Excellent well done.

Excellent chapter, please update soon.

Not Megan again, I thought she was going to get lost. Great chapter though. I'm really petrified of spiders too!!!!!

How sweet Martha waking up in Jack's arms . A really good chapter, please update soon.

At last the truth as come out, fantastic chapter, please update soon.

Great chapter. . Please update soon.

Poor Martha shes going through a rough time, and Jack too. Great chapter please update soon.

Great chapter, at last maybe Jack and Martha can get back togetheer.