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Jack is so caring and such a hero. Great chapter. Please please update soon.

Great chapter, please update soon.

Excellent.

Great once again.

Poor Jack. There maybe a final twist to the truth though lets hope. Great chapter please update soon

How sweet this is such a brilliant chapter I could cry. Please update soon.

Wow this is excellent just when you think it's coming to a end something else pops up. I wonder what Megans game is. Excellent read, please update soon.

Great chapter, maybe Jack could go with Martha and he could get a job at the local cop station. " and they all live happily ever after" Excellent well done.

Excellent chapter, please update soon.

Not Megan again, I thought she was going to get lost. Great chapter though. I'm really petrified of spiders too!!!!!

How sweet Martha waking up in Jack's arms . A really good chapter, please update soon.

At last the truth as come out, fantastic chapter, please update soon.

Great chapter. . Please update soon.

Poor Martha shes going through a rough time, and Jack too. Great chapter please update soon.

Great chapter, at last maybe Jack and Martha can get back togetheer.

great chapter, please update soon

excellent once again, please update soon

Poor martha, good on tony for comforting her. Why doesn't martha just tell them all what megan made her do they would defo believe her over megan im getting really angry with her. well done great chapter please update soon

That's a excellent chapter. I really hope they get back together now. And i really wish you could write the scripts for Jack and Martha in the show it would be excellent. Please update soon, i'm really enjoying it.

awwwwwww poor martha what a time she's having. please update soon.

arrrrrr megan makes me so angry and poor ray it was so sad. please let jack see what megan is up too martha will really need jack now, please please update real soon, excellent chapter can't wait for more.

great chapter , stay martha please and get back with jack.

great chapter once again please update soon,

Great chapter, please update soon, things are getting really good and i hope Martha tells jack about Megan blackmailing her soon.

great chapter i wish meagan would get lost and leave jack and martha alone please update soon