linzie_mac01

That is a great start, well written 'cause now everyone is confuddled as to the father! Don't leave us waiting too long though, that would be mean lol

God how frustrating!! Martha and her big mouth, why can't she tell him the flaming truth lol Another awesome chapter; loved the dialogue between Martha and Jack but also with Cas and Mattie and Martha

I am so shocked at the level Richard will stoop to just to get Martha away from Jack I personally think that Jack should abduct Martha so the both of them can escape to a nice secluded part of the world where no-one can interfer in their lives (*sigh*)

The flash back dream was what i have been waiting for! Yay i'm so happy now that she might be getting feelings back for Jack! I really like the fact you're not rushing their relationship, it makes their feelings more realistic and i kin of prefer the small progress that they are making rather than if they were to rush back together! I'm hoping you update tomorrow, have no clue who may be pregnant

How can Martha even consider giving up her entire future happiness for the likes of Eamon and Richard!! And Richard is being completely selfish and as for Eamon; well, he's just a sheep Baa!! (That made me feel a bit better)...but i wish Martha would realise that she's leading Jack on

Aww another cutie chapter from Nic!! I actually can't believe it lol! That was superb, just what i needed to read about J&M. I've been so depressed watching those two fight on TV at the moment, that i was in real need of some affection between them! so, yay, now i'm happy and i think that if you keep this up, i might just be able to survive the next few months of HAA jack-and-martha-less

Now that's what i'm talking about...some action, well nearly, but very close! I bet her deleted scene went something along the lines of: "I Lo...hate you" Martha said softly "I know" Jack sighed Goddamnit Nicole! Why ...just why did you delete it?

Yay!! Finally a cliffhanger that actually ends the chapter in a good way, i can't wait to see what Mac has in store for Jack. If he wasn't already gobsmacked that she turned up at his house, after what had happened earlier, then he will be soon (he he he)

Wow, that was...very dark! I like it; this chapter must have been very difficult to write and you did it brilliantly!! Can't wait to find out what Martha is goingt o do next!

Ooh cute chapter, i would never have guessed that scene was going to happen, but come on, where's the action!!! Stop making us wait

Thankies for the update it was excellent as per usual

That was really emotional, sweet little Alex! Hope that Jack and Martha don't have a rapid 'get back together', I would love to see them not fight as such, but get flashes of past memories when least expecting it (hint hint LOL). Although, can't blame Martha is she is love struck and wants to jump Jack lol

Woo Hoo i'm extra happy, 3 updates just read...fantastico!!! (big cheesy grin) And, if that wasn't enough...that last chapter had me in stiches; great attraction and my God, Jack is such a tease, although at the end, he should of grabbed Martha and whisked her off to her bedroom! That would teach her for posing at her doorframe like that LOL ;)

That was excellent!! Great suspense at the end...Jack really needs to tell someone about that cat lol I really love the tension you've created between Martha and Jack; i love it when they fight! You can just imagine the adrenaline and feel the tension, God they so want each other! Keep up the tension, thats all i want to say lol

That was absolutely fantastic, definitely some much needed Jack Martha tenderness I'm not giving up hope on those getting back together and i hope it going to be like how you described!

Bless, thats very cute! I'm sure Martha didn't need to apologise coz i think Jack forgave her after she kissed him Lol

Can't wait for the next chapter! I can just imagine how Martha will reat when she sees her gorgeous husband; completely in denial AGAIN, but secretly thanking God that he's a hottie

Well done!!! You survived your mocks AND came out with great results! I'm sure the others marks will be fantastic too. I went to see Bond the other week and i thought it was the best bond film i'd ever seen, in fact it got me thinking that maybe someone...hint hint... could make a JM bond style fic! how cool would that be! Anyway, enough with other fics, please update this one! everytime i see you've posted, i get my hope up and then realise you haven't I'm hopeful its gonna be today?!? i'd be the happiest person ;D

That was a brilliant ending and I'm so glad that it was finally a happy one Anyway, I'd just like to say how much i appreciate your time and hard work in writing these fantastic fics for us! You have kept us entertained from March 27th when you first posted undercover cop but i still remember that story as if i read it yesterday because it was so addictive! It seems like such a long time ago and that's because it is; keeping everyone so entertained for that length of time requires a lot of commitment. You have done so much in terms of the fanfiction site, you should rightly feel very proud of all your achievements

Shes not having much luck with her heart at the moment, bless her. Poor Martha! Hope she will be ok and gets the transplant