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He he, yep you're right, putting Paul and Jodi together was a smart move lol! But this is a really great fic, its cool reading about life on set!

Corr!!! That was hott stuff! OMG i'm speechless! Suppose i'll just let their actions do the talking for the moment, til the next chapter! lol

That was just fantastic! Definitely not what i was expecting at the end, which was good actually because it left me really trying to understand why Martha would leave Jack when she should need his support. But i suppose everyone deals with their own grief in different ways, and you put that across perfectly. Well done, I hope more fics are on the way

This fic has been sensitively written right from the beginning, you did great to control and lead such an intense storyline! The ending was completely unexpected and in a sad way it fitted the rest of the fic, even though I am now falling into the depths of depression, it was good to have a unique change from all the happy endings.

Awww OMG OMG that was amazing and so sweet!! And when i realised at the end, that they found each other again and sorted things out; well lets just say i actually squealed out loud in excitment! Lol I loved how you left that bit to our own imaginations, and how you broke up the story into the different pov's and stages in the relationship! Pure genius

That was wicked!! Oh god i was in stitches at all the great one liners and everyone's reactions at the dinner table! Well done, great dialogue!

That was the best ending ever!! Well done for writing such a complicated fic, I loved how the whole story evolved from Corey!!

Wow!!!! OMG I've missed so much of this fic!! Have just caught up from page 7! And i hate to say it but Martha is being ridiculous, how on earth can she put Grace before her own baby; her baby needs a daddy too! I can only hope that if she doesn't come to her senses then Luc will, and he will confess to Jack! Great updates, I've really missed reading it!

Hello Stranger! Have caught up on the last, i think, 10 chapters!!!!! and its fantastic writing. God I've missed this fic lol. Please update soon

OMG OMG that was addictive, I can't stop reading this over and over again. Callum is sick, more than sick to send Jack that awful image of Martha. How dare he!! Jack needs to stop blaming himself though and start focusing on finding her before anything else happens!

Grrr!!!!!!!! God Mason is such a slime ball, i hate him! How could he say those things to Martha, she has to remember what he did! And I am not looking forward to Jack doubting her, how on earth could he think Martha would willing sleep with Mason, especially after he reaction when he found her!

Woo Hoo more chapters, yippee!!!!! I love this fic and i want it to last as long as possible, and that last chapter was really sweet! Loved Jack's cheeky-ness, god he's definitely so very very very hot! LOL

Absolutely great fic, i love it! God you are really leaving us hanging on the edge about Jack! He has to be ok, him and Martha have a very long and wonderful life still to live . Please?

Yay this is great another Nicole fic about my two fav people ! This has really made my evening, thanks for posting another fic, i don't know where you find the time to do all this writing lol. But i'm not complaining, its great. In fact its more than great, yay another nicole fic woo hoo

It was good to hear Jacks POV, and talking to Mia; that was a great way to show how much he cares for his family, awww

Yay!!!! I've justr caught up with the last 3 chapters and they are great I'm sooooooooooooo glad martha is back with Jack and he is just perfect; making them both breakfast, awww

Awww that chapter was the sweetest! You did a good job portraying Martha's vulnerability, I really felt as if i knew what she was thinking! Can't wait for the final chapters, this has been a truely amazing fic

OMG Marthaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Come on Jack don't just stand there with your mouth gaping, DO SOMETHING!!!!!! Great last couple of chapters

Wow that was a fantastic update, as usual Martha is great, I love her

Wow that was an excellent update! I'm glad she got to speak to someone to let them know where she was, although it wasn't uch help. And Lucas, would you stop rabbiting on for one sec! Bless him, I can't wait for him to tell Jack

Wow that was so sad, poor Martha I feel like crying with her I'm dying to know how Jack will react though

I suppose I can forgive her a little (*mumbles*) but not completely yet; she still has a long way to go!

Ha take that Megan! (*satisfied grin*) She should know better than to think it would be easy to split them two up! (:S) Jack was so sweet and such a typical bloke; god how can he not see those blantantly obvious signs from Megan? Hey Jacky open up your gorgeous eyes lol

Thanks for the updates, have onyl just been free to read them and they were great! I have been waiting all weekend to get a chance to read them damn it, but then i find two chapters and its all worth the wait! Loved the different writing styles, flashbacks were a good reminder of the guilt Martha is feeling; I could feel it too and I actually feel sorry for her! She couldn't help being so naive. And Jack is still concerned for her, even though he must remember all the awful things she said to him and the fact that she rejected his last call. (*sigh*) Go on Jacky baby, you go and bring back your precious Martha!!

I love it already, its great! You're a very descriptive writer and i like that in fics! Can't wait to find out more, sounds very interesting!