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Hang on a second, I had to get my head around the whole role reversal thing. Normally it is Martha who has second thoughts about their relationship and i was so not expecting Jack to turn around and say "I don't know". For gods sake just something like "we can work it out" but not "i don't know". Pft Jack you are so stupid. i think he needs his head examined lol

Goddamn it I thought you had added a chapter Please post pleaseeeeeeeeeee lol

That was so intense and graphic: urgh and eww at the same time! God I can't imagine anything like that, probably a good thing though. Especially how you described Corey slumped over her; it made my skin crawl :S Great stuff, but i am definitely glad Martha and Irene weren't killed. Can't wait till tomorrow Hope Irene is ok

Oh god that was brilliantly well written! I can't stop the tears from coming, I could really seem to understand how Martha was feeling and even as I screamed at the computer for her not to have a shower and for her not to burn her clothes, I knew why she did what she had to do even if it did destroy any evidence . Poor Martha (*sobs*) Has any one got a tissue, maybe a box of tissues?

that was a really sweet update Glad to see them two making out... oops i mean making-up

Your writing has been so good that I think I might cry. I feel so sorry for Martha and I am wondering what she is going to be like when she wakes up; will she realise it was Mason? Will she even realise? :o Please update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeee lol

Yay I'm so happy, Martha's pregnant and the baby is going to be gorgeous (if it is Jacks)! That was a really good chapter, it must have been so hard trying to incorporate all those characters at the bar, so well done

Another fantastic chapter!! Glad Jacky boy finally woke up, even i was starting to wonder whether you had changed your mind and decided to kill him off But yay great 'manly' scene between the Holden boys lol But I wish Martha would do a runner

Thanks for the double update!!! Don't like Mason one bit (grrr) he better stay away from Martha, or Jack and Macca will not be happy! I hope that Macca turns up soon

Great chapter Nicole!!! That was a really good emotional scene with Martha listening to Jack pleading with her to get away! She deserves to be upset and to suffer some more for not believing Jack! But I do hope she gets away from Callum, why the hell doesn't she ring Peter and tell him where they are before Callum drives off?

I'm so glad Martha finally realises that Jack would never do that to her, she is stupid and deserves to grovel but then of course they have to make up, which is always fun

That was excellent! But goddamit Martha why are you so stubborn?? i was actually hoping Jack would have more of a go at her cause she really deserves to be shouted at! If that is Martha at the door then Jack should yell at her some more before he explains so that she feels extra guilty. But somehow its not going to be that straight forward; it is a J&M fic after all lol.

Ah bless, this is the Martha we all love Clever girl but stupid girl for putting yourself in so much danger. I really hope she shot Corey! When i was reading it i was overcome suddenly by this strange sensation, like a tingling feeling. I briefly wondered what it was and then i realised that I should really stop holding my breath cause it was making me dizzy. Talk about knowing how Martha was feeling lol Oh i almost forgot: please update i don't think its good for me having to hold my breath for much longer

That is so so sad and sweet. Martha couldn't have listened to the message. It must have been Peter chasing up the lead on the address to the stolen ring, which obviously led to Callum's cause he stole it. Damn Martha for being so ignorant!!! She is really going to regret cancelling that call if Jack dies and she deserves everything she gets! I am officially not one happy bunny thanks to you

Calm down!! Calm down!! How can i possibly calm down!? I know Jack's not going to die but he is still laying there bleeding and in pain, and no-one apart from Callum knows where he is!! OMG!! Oh i'm really sad and i'm going to go to work sad now too . i may have to check tomorrow at work for an update cause this is serious stuff! One good thing though, as far as i can gather. Jack still has the ring. that gives me great comfort. How awful would it have been if Callum had used it on Martha; the perfect ring. Jack would never have been able to replace it!!

That was very emotional writing Dolly. I think you tackled this issue strongly, pointing out how dangerous an act it is but yet you still conveyed how desperately sad and lonely she was. It was fantastic. I love all you fics, the writing skill is superb and I knew that you would be capable of delivering such a powerful story!

Yet another great update, go Luc!!!! But come on, leaving it there AGAIN this is so not funny anymore

That was amazing!! I just caught up reading the last 3 chapters and it was very intense; the struggle between Jack and David and then the whole tension between Jack and Martha. I really didn't want them to split up cause none of it was Jack's fault! I loved the ending, Jack was so sincere; it was beaultiful to read how much he adores her awww. Well done, hope there will be another!!

Sorry about that jacknmarthalover! But i had to say something lol, the realisation was driving me nuts. Nicole you had better update soon please! Pretty please?

OMG OMG Callum is worse than i thought! OMG i realised what he has done :o Please post again, please! Jack has to watch the video and then he will realise. OMG what if he uses the ring on Martha :o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nicole has said it all!!!!! That chapter was hilarious in a wierd sort of way; i was sad for M&J's situation but Alf is bloody fantastic!! You are really good at putting each character across, it makes me laugh to imagine them saying the things you write cause its so good :D But don't think you can get away without posting Mac's secret, I am craving to know...

Great updates, am glad Luc finally clicked as whats going on with Jack and MArtha, bright spark bless him! lol

Great update i loved it when Jack was so concerned for Martha, awww! But like Nicole said, if David harms Jack then i will not be accountable for my actions!

What do you mean thats when the fun begins? I though you were already having loads of fun getting us lots so wound up! lol You can't possibly put us through any more :S

Oh thats just great, Martha you have well and truely gone and put your foot in it now! I don't think you could have stuffed up your future relationship with Jack any more than you already have. God I'm so disappointed with her! How can she not realise that Jack would never even look at another girl let alone sleep with one!! She dumped him for Gods sake. Aargh its making me so mad; actually i think its giving me a huge headache Nicole i can't wait to see how its all going to turn out, surely there is no future for them; how could Jack forgive her after everything she has done to him?