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Grrr you've gone and stopped it THERE!!! God i hope its the right place, I can't wait to see what Jack will do to David when he finds him, if he finds him :S

Awww he loves her, he loves her, he loves her!!! Yay i'm over the moon and that was really good how you expressed Jack's feeling for Martha. (*sigh*) He is just the most perfect boyfriend ever; sweet, tender, caring, and not to mention good in bed lol

Huh split us up, I think we are more united together on this one Nicole!! LOL You will have to go into hiding soon if you keep messing around with poor Jack and Martha's heads!

Yay i'm so happy that Dylan's Jack's, but there is one HUGE problem that we are all forgetting: Nooooooooooooooooo Jack what the hell were you thinking :( It can't be a mistake, it just can't!!! Hopefully he might think differently now knowing that Dylan is his, if Martha tells him that is :S

I have to say you are very good at keeping me guessing!! I'm dying to find out Martha's secret, i thought i knew but now i'm not so sure :S Please update i'm enjoying this

This is a really cool fic!!! I am really scared for Martha, that David guy is creeping me out, in an evil way. I don't like him. Where the bloody hell is Jack? Why can't he stop david from kidnapping Martha? I hope she is ok :S

Ohh Jack will you just get on with it and actually punch Callum in the mouth!!! God Callum is such a creep; the way he said that made my mouth drop. I couldn't believe he actually said it. Well I should have expected Callum to say something like that, but OMG how rude!!! And another thing, why the hell is Martha listening to his lies?? He made me so mad...'Oh yes Martha in a few days you will be over Jack and can move on; I'll be waiting' Aargh!!!! Callum stay AWAY!

I'm backing up team Bay girl on this one!!! Everything she said! When i get my hands on Callum he will never be able to touch Martha again, you hear me??? I'm thinking chainsaw...very small body parts...thrown out to sea! Ha!! then try and get to Martha you creep!!! When Mia answered the door though it was hilarious, and then when Peter came in the room I couldn't stop thinking about a threesome, never mind Jack being with Mia. Jack Mia and Peter!!! LOL God, if only Martha had seen Peter aswell, what a joke LOL

Wow this story is really action packed with events; its brilliant!! Looking forward to your next post so long as that freaky person doesn't ring again!

Awww i'm so happy!! They got together yay (just for the record - I would have killed you too ) but for the minute all is good

What, Nooooooooooo!!! You can't leave it there! Talk about what? god damn it! lol. I kept scrolling up and down the page thinking that my screen had missed it, but you left it THERE!!!!!!! of all the cliffhangers..! please update pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Cool thanks for letting us know! Good luck with the exam!!! Looking forward to the next update

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!! I just sent you a pm actually lol about it! yay go Nicole, can't wait to read!! OMG i was so nearly going to hurt someone when i was reading that. I thought firstly, how dare they come round to Jacks and be so blatant in his face and kissing Callum ewww. Then when i realised it was a dream...Nicole that was excellent writing! Poor jack having those nightmares, i feel so sad for him. Peter needs to tell him not to move on but to try and persevere getting Martha back, she needs to know what she's missing! And Jack needs to get her back before Callum gets his slimy hands on her!

Yippee another chapter, thank you!!! And yippee Peter's back!!!! Come on Pete cheer Jacky boy up I hated Callum at his apartment with Martha, what a sleeze. Get your slimy hands off her, do you hear me moron? And why the hell has Martha gone running straight to Callum in the first place? God she is really starting to annoy me, why can't she see that its all Callum's fault that her and Jack broke up? All i can say is that if Callum touches her again, then i will not be accountable for my actions!!!! He has been warned... Nicole, I think you had not leave it too long til you post again, i think i might explode! lol

I think Martha's the only one who didn't see that Jack still loves her...tut tut tut what is she like!?! Well she got a bit of a shock seeing the photo lol! This is a great fic but you need to post more! What is Martha going to do about Jacky boy still being head over heels in love with her?

Yep loving this fic , please post soon, i'm dying to find out Mac's secret!!!

Love the update!! Come on Martha just give Jack a chance to explain, you know he wouldn't ever cheat on you!!

I've just caught up reading the last couple of chapters and OMG he is a freak. A perverted freak. Ewww sicko! Please update soon

Corey is just a sick sick deluded perverted psycho, i felt so disgusted at what he did to Martha and then tormenting Jack like that. God i hope that Jack beats the living daylights outta him!

Yay thats the Jack we all know and love!! Aww every time Jack nearly cried I neary cried too . Beth was really sweet and I loved the way she was compared to his mum, that was just awww!

I agree, count me in on the cheerleading squad!! Go Jack (*throws arms in the air*) take out your aggression out on Callum!! (normally i would disagree with that sort of behaviour but desparate times and all that...) I'll be standing on the side-line waving my pom poms

In response to you post abot Martha dying Nicole! I am sad that you killed her off cause i really did think that you would never do something like that, especially after you were so emtional reading Dolly's fics! lol. But this it actually fitted in with this story and you wrote it well and it made me feel a happy sad rather than a get murdered storyline. If you know what i mean lol. Anyway I cannot wait to read your new fic

That was really really sad, i agree with Nicole. How can Jack ever trust Mac again? She cheated on him and to make it worse it wasn't just a once off! If you do carry on I don't think they should have a happy ending because of it. Maybe you could show their regrets; how unhappy Martha is realising it was stupid mistake, but also from Jacks view as to why he may never be able to trust her again. I don't know, just my opinion!

Wow that was absolutely beautiful! Now i understand why you found it so hard to write. God i'm still crying now, that was really sad, but lovely. Jack would make the best dad in the world, him and Matt bless them. I guess the males in the Holden family continue lol and that was nice how Tasha had the baby for them. Awww that was the sweetest gift any best friend could do! Oh god i'm blubbering again, i better stop writing before i burst into tears lol That was the perfect ending to a heartwrenching story

Wow that was really amazing, very descriptive. I felt as though i was there in the room with Martha. And i did laugh when Pete crashed around, bless him. What a time to stuff up lol. But yay Jack to the rescue, awww he's my hero lol