Yay! An update!
Love, love, loved!! The first part of the chapter was great, I like how Milko encourages Sally to ask questions and confront people about their feelings.
The Frank flashbacks were written really well. Really emphasised the last part...
His Dad would always be part of his life, but the Fletchers were his home.
There is such a sweet innocence about the way you've written the children in this story, especially Sally and Kane and the flashback Frank had... and then you've written an 'adult world', and yet all the same kinds of feelings and emotions and probelms are still relevant there as well. Lol, I hope that makes sense...
And the kids worry about the adults and try thier hardest to make things better, that's just gorgeous! I always think it's sad how people lose touch with their inner child and their dreams... I'm so glad there is hope...
Wonderfully well written chapter!