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Lol, I loved that bit at the end where Tom was calling Rocco rockie and Roccon. That so made me laugh! Update soon!

Awww, that was just the nicest ending. I'm so glad that everything turned out okay. I like how Mel stepped forward at the end there and told Jamie that the past should be in the past. I guess I liked how brave she was to do that. I'm sad that it's all over! You really are a very talented writer and I have enjoyed this fic so much. The characters really felt real to me, especially Kane and Scott. I never saw much of him on H&A, but you wrote thier past/background really well. The whole thing was just brilliant. You have a very descriptive and poetic style and that's my favourite kind of writing, it really drew me into the story. Brilliant.

Wow! So many updates! And I love the cover. It's awesome! This is really good. I can't believe that Nicky/Shannon was scamming an insurance company to help her brother. Wow. Great stuff. Awww, I hope that Johnny's not dead. He needs to cause trouble for everyone.... Please update soon!

That was a really nice story, short and sweet. Loved it!

Awesome! I love how Sally care for Rocco a lot. That damn Johnny, it's kinda scary... why can't he just leave him alone... Great update!

Omg! Cuteness! Rocco and Nicky are together! Awwww.... Great updates! Can't wait to see more.

Great update! The ending was really good. I'm really intrigued with her story! Don't like Tom though he should just leave so that Nicky and Rocco can be together! lol. This is getting better and better. I liked how you wrote Johnny's emotions. That was really nice! Update again soon!

Noooo... the last chapter?!? Whatever will I do...? Those last two were great. Still trying to get over the shock of all the revealations. How all the characters and thier past/present/future were all intertwined was written so well. That scene with Dani and Kane was kinda sweet. Like there was some kind of closure there between them. Especially when he commented that he "wanted to kill that sicko..." I'm looking forward to the last chapter, but at the same time I'm not... because it's the last chapter

This is really great. Loving this. Everything is so mysterious! I hope Rocco is going to be okay! Please update again soon.

Wow, this is getting really good. Loving the Rocco/Nicky stuff! Can't wait to see your next update!

^ I agree, she seems like an interesting character Great update!

Johnny is evil! Can't believe that Ashton helped him get to Matilda. I like how Matilda is standing up for herself. I know she can't really do much, but I still think she's really brave. Great writing. Can't wait to see more! I hope Johnny doesn't get the chance to hurt her!

Aww, thanks you guys! Your comments are so nice. I did think of continuing it, like to show Jack's side of things or something, but then I thought nah. Lol, maybe I'll do another one shot like a sequel... Thanks heaps!

Awww, thank you. I was quite nervous because it was my first one! So thanks for your really nice comment!

Awesome fic. I like your idea of making Rocco confess that he stabbed Sally. That was great to see a different twist in the story. But he died! Awww... poor guy! he just can't get a break...

Awww poor Rocco!!! I like how Sally wants to take care of Rocco. And he hates lying to her, that's so sweet of him! Can't wait to see your next update!

Yay! A Rocco fic! This is really awesome! Poor Rocco having to do the gang's dirty work. I hope he doesn't get into too much trouble with Johnny. I'm really liking the Nicky character. She's really intriguing. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens in this fic.

Wow, that was a really powerful chapter. You were right... everything fell into place. So Ron was Diane's lover AND Melanie's dad. Wow, what a revealation! I loved how you wrote the Gus/Diane/Ron bit. It was very interesting to know how they were all connected. That was a really great line. I actually felt really sorry for Ron. The things that we do for love... Richie... so threatening and violent. But you write it so well, I could actually picture it. Poor Kane.

That was a really awesome chapter! The dialogue was great as well! I really like how you've written Jack and Martha's emotions, it just seems really realistic for the situation! Can't wait to see more!

Great writing! But I can't believe Scotty died! Okay, now I've been thinking about it lots because your story is so very brilliant, and here are my theories: I don't believe that Scott would have hurt Jamie. Like you emphasised about his confrontation with Kirsty and how he had a conscience. Scotty always looked out for Kane and I really don't think he would've done anything to his own nephew. He's bad and he had conflicting emotions, but I don't think he's that evil. Then there was the quote when Kane was watching Scott pull Melanie up. Something about how there was something going on and there was a "secret that Scott and Melanie shared." I'm thinking that was somehow connected to Ron, because earlier (sorry I can't remember what chapter) when Kane said something about Ron Wilson to Melanie... I think she turned around stunned or something? But it gave the impression like she knew of him. Because why would she be suprised/stunned? And I think however/whatever she knows about him, was the reason she passed Jamie to Scott. That sort of hit me with the last sentence in your last chapter “...up on those cliffs someone was going to kill Jamie... So Ron wanted to hurt Jamie... but that's where I'm confused, because he was Jamie's teacher. And also about how Melanie and Scott know Ron... But then again Colleen knew Ron from way back when and she is the town gossip, so maybe they heard something from her? The other thing that hit me was that Diane had a lover... who I'm guessing was the guy that Kane thought he stabbed. So if he didn't die, what happened to him? [edit] I just proof read the post and it's not what I think it is... is it? The diamonds! Omg! All that time!!!!! But I guess Scotty was like Pandora's Box. All that was left at the end was hope... Sorry for my rambling... but I'm very intrigued to see what happens!

What the? I loved the action and drama in that chapter, it all flowed really nicely. I really felt for Kirsty, Dani and Jade in that chapter, especially when Kirsty felt guilty about choosing Kane. There was a bit in there where you described the sea, the waves and the sky. That was brilliant. Your writing kind of has this magical realism element to it, if that's the right saying Aah what's going to happen!?!

OMG!!! So picturing the OC right now... That chapter was the cuteness, especially when Jack was alike "Our ride, my lady!" Awwww, just gorgeous! I can't believe the next one is the last chapter