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Adia

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  1. Great update, I'm on the edge of my seat! Corey moves fast doesn't he Update soon!
  2. OMG! Dani Great chapters. I liked the description of the town... the contrasts between the gardens and houses to the junkies and stuff. That was really good. This is just so great I'm lost for words. Loved the background to that night Richie bashed Diane. He's such a monster. But the last bit about Scott looking out for Kane and "having to grow up quickly etc" that was awesome and so believable. It just emphasised the stuff that I had already constructed about the character. That was really powerful... Okay so Ron's gone... and Colleen. Two down one to go...
  3. Click on the "Chapter One" thingee Becky...
  4. That was awesome! You've written the characters really well, and I loved the dialougue between Johnny and Ric in the cell. Great start! Can't wait to read more!
  5. Zetti! I was just about to leave and go to bed, awesome update! Great ending. God I sooo was not expecting Corey to turn up, but i'm glad that he has. Jack's reaction was so funny. Poor Martha. I really wonder what is instore for her!?
  6. I thought there was an update
  7. Awwwww, I actually think that's really sweet of Jack. But they're both going to the city right? Ooh I can't wait to see what happens with Adam! Awesome chapter!
  8. Okay I Love Music, I think I am officially stalking you...so... I hope that's not too annoying... Skykat this is a great fic and I love how you've brought all these different characters together! Hayley is great! Even when she's down she manages to keep that bitchy composure about her. Or maybe that's just confidence? But I love it anyway! I actually like Kim in this fic out of the guys, I feel sorry for him! I think you summed it up when you said how he had the looks of a greek god, but the lack of confidence thing... So true! The poor guy! But that brooding bad boy Kane! You have written him perfectly and I can't wait to see who he ends up with. It's not Martha is it? Because I seriously believe that she belongs with Jack! I love how layered the characters are. Like Cassie being insecure about her and Martha... even though they're friends, and Gypsy being the "town bike" but actually being vunerable on the inside. Kit is another great character! And poor Will! The dialogue is fantastic! Great writing as well! It's very descriptive and I can really picture everything going on. Can't wait to see more!
  9. You're an angel for updating Tasha! There was cuteness there... Jack talking to the bubba... awww. Dr Summer Cohen. Nice touch. Glad Sam is gone... yay! I seriously am addicted to reading fics on here... but you all write such great stories! I really should go and get some fresh air...
  10. Great ideas Sian!
  11. Hehe, take your time, your writing is always worth the wait. SBH - is that another fic that I should read? I come on here just about everyday and there are still so many fics that I haven't read yet...
  12. Can't wait to see it!
  13. That was great! I hope that last line is a sign of what is to come! You described everything so well and your writing was just fantastic! I especially loved the cake bit!
  14. I have read all the chapters and am all caught up! If that's the case then it really shows what a talented writer you are! You've created a really special group of characters and conveyed thier emotions so well! That was very touching. It reminded me of when Ric first went to live with Sally and Flynn. I remember Pippa doing the same thing with Jack and I think for them to care about the kids like that is very special, and it's something that has continued. That was great how Steven and Frank confronted Scott! That was such a great scene! Scotty has quite an influence... love how Milko's character has changed and how Kane and Sally have internalised everything. I sooo want to be a little kid again! How sweet is Lance! I hope that he and Kathy can get Milko back! And I can't wait to see what kind of pay back Frank gives to Steven! Great writing as always!
  15. OMG Tasha I have tears in my eyes! That was so heart wrenching, but it was great. I soooo loved it all! Hehe, that made me laugh. Colleen is so hilarious! Awww Jack and Martha! Awww, that scene at the cliff was painful, but sweet. Great writing Tasha it was so brilliant! Can't wait for the next update. Better be some cuteness at the ultrasound!
  16. Lol, at least they won't be men in white coats... then I'd be scared! So does that mean we haven't seen the last of Ron yet? I need to find new words that mean brilliant, amazing, fantastic, great... but your writing is just all of the above and more! Love it! I have a confession, *don't tell anyone* but I can kind of relate to Kane and Scott... and that was one of the things that I used to do. The way you've described everything created the atmosphere so well, I almost felt like I was in the room with them, the detail was just fantastic. I liked how you wrote about the mouse, the cockroaches and the zombie... for me... it really emphasised the darkness and, I guess the rawness/horror of the situation. That was so incredibly sad. I feel like giving Gus a taste of his own medicine! ^ Very true... until of course the big bad world taints their innocence. It's great that the Sutherlands never rejected Jamie, especially with their history with Kane. Great ending, you really know how to keep me hanging and checking back everyday for an update!
  17. Aww So sad how Rachel had to choose! Great update, I would love to see more soon! Pretty please!
  18. That was brilliant. You're a really good writer! I felt sorry for Tony and Matilda, especially after she said she wanted her mum. Its times like that when you realise how much you miss someone. But it's so sweet that he is there for her. I hope Mattie is going to be okay!
  19. Awesome chapter! Even better now that possesive Ashton has gone! I loved that! I really thought she was going to slap him or something. McGrath was very cool at the end.
  20. That was really sad. I can actually imagine that. As the story has gone on, she's become so much more distant. But I guess that's how people deal with the violence around them. That's just really really sad. Awesome! The way you write just amazes me! Loving it! Still feeling a bit weird about Ron though. I know he tried to save Jamie, but he obviously has some other reason or intention for being there which I just cannot fathom. Maybe I'm reading too much into it? But that was a great ending. I can't wait to see what else happens!
  21. Awesome update! Yay the baby is Jack's! And yay! Ashton and Sam will be gone, but can Rory stay? Great writing there Tasha I really love your style! I really felt sorry for Martha after reading that. Can't wait to see more, so please update soon!
  22. This is a great fic Zetti, I have just read it all. I agree with Paris... get J/M to hook up and have an affair... but I thought she had a restraining order on him? great writing as well!
  23. Brilliant update! Especially with the bits about Kane and Scott's past. It really brought me some perspective about their characters. Really well written. I can so imagine that happening. I liked how it sort of broke up the tension/danger in the air. I totally believe that. I've always felt that Scott was just like his Dad, especially after reading the earlier bit about him and his mates robbing the shop. They are very similar. It's as if Richie was 'grooming' him for that kind of life since the day he was born. Where as Kane is so much more like his Mum and you can tell because of the genuine way that he cares and worries about her. It's more the fact that he actually CARES. I like that there is a bond between the brothers even though Scott comes across as uncaring and violent etc. I think that was really emphasised in the previous bit where Richie came home and Scott told him to get in the cupboard and hide, and then he came back later to get Kane out of the cupboard. I really sympathise with Kane and Scott as kids, they've really had to grow up faster than other kids and look out for each other to literally stay alive. Scotty is seriously giving my precious Johnny a run for his money... I know they're both bad... but... *sigh*
  24. The cropping on the Sally avs are awesome! Love them!
  25. OMG! What is she doing! He's an innocent little boy! Mel was brave going to help him, but OMG.... Amazing writing as always, it's so... I guess... poetic and I love that. The first paragraph was just beautiful, reminded me of a book called "The Alchemist": Three people... you have got me hooked! That was very poignant. Really shows where Dani is at an emotional level. At least she wasn't deliberately avoiding poor wee Jamie.
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