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Adia

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  1. Great chapters Tasha! That was so cool how Martha kicked some a**. Gosh Ashton is a jerk!I think Jack pretty much summed up what I think: And OMG Jack and Martha are so cute. The soooo belong together: Can't wait to see the Jack and Ash fight, so update soon!
  2. I only have about six chapters to go, but it's 3.20am now and I should be sleeping... Here are some of my favourite bits... Loved that! Kane is so naive and Scotty is just... *sigh* Scotty. Again, I love the innocence and naiveity that Sally and Kane have. It makes the whole situation so much more believable! I loved the ending as well about Kane and the dragon. Gosh that was so dramatic! My heart kind of jumped when I read that last bit! But you've written Sally's feelings really well! When I was little and did something wrong... I imagined that same scenario! Lol! Love the dialogue, so realistic! Hehe Steven and Frank remind me of my uncles... I liked Carly's backstory as well. She has so many layers and its cool how you've touched on some of her emotions. *sigh* Another heart skipping a beat moment... Gosh, I hope I didn't quote too much... but I'm really enjoying it so far. The characters have been written so well, I never watched H&A when they were on (bit hard when you're a toddler...) but I can really picture them and their interactions with each other. Great writing as always!
  3. That was just the cuteness! But the end! I felt so sorry for them both! My favourite bit was when Jack ate the baby food. There is such great chemistry between them, I love it! Great writing as always! Update soon!
  4. Awesome chapter. You set the scene really well... the way you just thread it all together is just fantastic. I think that really captures the essence of Colleen's character in this fic and how you repeated the notion throught that little section really emphasises her sadness. That was great! I like how you've described his fear. Jamie is a really good character and it's really cool that we see things from his point of view. It's always nice to remember what it's like seeing the world in a child's eyes. Can't wait to read more!
  5. How could I have missed this fic?! I've read up to Chapter Four so far, and I really like what you've written. As always your writing is brilliant and the characters are just great! I love how you've written Sally, she just seems so sweet and innocent. How cute is she? I have to go to work, but I will catch up on the chapters when I get home. Great writing!
  6. Yay Tasha! Another fic. Good start. Yeah you confused me as well. At first I thought Jack then Ash, but *crosses fingers* it has to be Jack's! I'm convinced! I knew you'd make the baby a boy. And you know that I love that name Jayden. Can't wait to see more!
  7. I would thank you forever and a day if you did that! *waits patiently* Chapter 19 was by far one of the best pieces of writing I have ever read. Seriously. I'm not kidding. It was fantastically brilliant! For some reason I'd always pictured Kane's mum to be all distant and glassy eyed, and I loved how eleven year old Scotty took control of the situation. Poor Kane though having to live with the guilt of doing something so violent, especially when he was too young to really understand what was going on. Great writing, can't wait to read more!
  8. That chapter was just great! I loved all the dialogue between Cassie, Martha and Mattie, and Jack assuming the test was Martha's was really good. That was so cute how Martha blushed... awwww Loving this!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
  9. Great chapter! I seriously love this fic! Yay! Martha remembered Corey! I'm glad that her and Jack had a talk. I loved the "no way" "yes way" bit. Jack and Martha are so cute... Can't wait for the next update!
  10. Great two chapters! You are a really brilliant writer! Mel has got me intrigued... I wonder what her REAL reason was for coming to the Bay then? I am loving the way you've been describing Scott... *sigh* I wish Johnny Cooper and Scott Phillips were friends... Poor little Jamie! But he seems like a pretty strong kid. I hope he's going to be okay!
  11. ^ They are all great. That first one of Belle/Drew is so cute,and I especially like the one where she's holding the apple... well I'm sure it's an apple... the green thing...
  12. Hmmm, Nasty. Dark. Fast. Extreme. Violent. Abusive. I'm in that kind of mood too, so I'll see what I can do.
  13. What kind of nasty? I may have an idea...
  14. Great work Jen, the Rocco ones are fab, and the Mattie and Ric ones are gorgeous!
  15. ^ Damn, I thought it was an update... I'm having trouble getting on there too...
  16. You're writing gets better and better. I was literally on the edge of my seat I nearly fell off... Beautiful language! Everything was described so incredibly well! Please update again soon!
  17. Hey Emma!

    I left you a message in my fic... but the thingee won't let me reply to your PM, but yes! I'd love to chat... you can add me on msn if you want to... it's

    vjsharifah@hotmail.com

    have a nice day :)

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  18. Nooo! Jamie! That was really good. I love how you've written the Scott/Kane relationship and that chapter really put some perspective on thier characters. It was great. Hmmm, Scotty really intrigues me. He is one very determined guy... Great chapter, can't wait to see more!
  19. Wow, that was amazing! I could totally picture everything playing out. I like the relationship between Ric and Cindy. I'm glad that she's teaching him a few things as well, he seems so innocent compared with the people that he's around. The drama is great, and I love your style of writing. I'd love to see where you go with this fic
  20. Loving the way you describe everything. Brilliant! I agree with Eli I knew he was human! Poor Jade, but I like that the Sutherlands are still sticking by her. I'm glad she still called them Mum and Dad. That was sweet. Dear old Colleen! She really does have a way with words! Oooh, Ron is going back to check on Kirsty and Jamie... Jamie is so cute. I love that he is protective of his mum even though he is a little kid. The ending was great. I'm hanging in suspense. Please update soon!
  21. Talk to Her
  22. I agree! This is such a great fic. I love how everything is all intertwined and parallel to each other ... Jamie and Kane with the knife... the memory about the stash... The snippet of Dani was really interesting too. The description was great. I could totally imagine the scene. Your writing is so expressive and I really really like it! This is awesome and I can't wait to see more!
  23. ha ha Sian I thought the same thing with the R/K... Really good fic Rosey (can I call you Rosey?) I love how there was a happy ending for Rachel and Kim. It was great!
  24. I just read the whole thing. Part Three with Flynn was so sad! I was honestly getting teary. I agree with Jen, I like the way you've re-created the Flynn/Ric relationship. Your writing is really good. You convey Ric's emotions so well. Ric is one of my favourite characters because of how complex he is and you have a really good job showing his conflicting emotions. Can't wait to see the next update!
  25. Martha and Lucas were so funny! That was great. Martha was being a bit bossy, but I hope it's building up that *romantic* tension between her and Jack! I can't wait to see the next chapter either! Great writing!
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