I only have about six chapters to go, but it's 3.20am now and I should be sleeping...
Here are some of my favourite bits...
Loved that! Kane is so naive and Scotty is just... *sigh* Scotty.
Again, I love the innocence and naiveity that Sally and Kane have. It makes the whole situation so much more believable! I loved the ending as well about Kane and the dragon.
Gosh that was so dramatic! My heart kind of jumped when I read that last bit! But you've written Sally's feelings really well! When I was little and did something wrong... I imagined that same scenario! Lol!
Love the dialogue, so realistic! Hehe Steven and Frank remind me of my uncles... I liked Carly's backstory as well. She has so many layers and its cool how you've touched on some of her emotions.
*sigh*
Another heart skipping a beat moment...
Gosh, I hope I didn't quote too much... but I'm really enjoying it so far. The characters have been written so well, I never watched H&A when they were on (bit hard when you're a toddler...) but I can really picture them and their interactions with each other. Great writing as always!