Jamey-Maria

I think you may be right. Anyway great chapter. Update soon.

Fantastic as per usual, but seeing as you think i'm crazy i won't say anymore lol! Just kidding, hope they get back together soon.

Excellent as per usual, update soon.

I love this fan fic you have to update ASAP!!!!! You know i have so many people in my head that i hate. I've read too many Jack and Martha fan fics and they're all coming together in my head. lol. I'm going nuts! I have three people at the top of my list at the moment i hate them all equally so no particular order Hit List 1) Corey- In the dark 2)Callum- Under cover cop 2 3)Julia- split Anyway fantastic writing and excellent story. Keep it up

I love this fan fic Nicole it's brilliant. I don't think i've ever hated anyone as much as i hate Callum. Must admit it felt kinda weird raising my fists to a computer screen though, and i got many funny looks from my parents. I wonder what's happened to Jack. I hope it's not bad. Oh my god he hasn't had an accident has he? Getting myself worked up again. backing off *moves away from the computer* Post again soon

Oh my god. that was so good. How could you just leave it there. Man i can't believe i felt sorry for corey i hate him now. Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please Update!!!!!!! this is my favourite fanfic and i think that your an absolutley amazing writer and i hope i don't sound weird but you inspired me to write my own fan fic.

You no i neva thought i'd say this bur Martha PLEAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ LISTEN TO LUKE! god i'm wrapped in this fan fic pleaz update soon

fantastic fanfic! i;m relly intrigued. keeo uo the good work