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omg ok i'll start with the first chapter why the hell would you run to total moroons like callum martha?? your acting like an idiot!!!! go to your best friend!! for heavens sake! and secondly Nicole why did you write that freakin dream lol it scared the hell out of me. How dare you callum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! arghhhh lol Fantastic writing Nicole! and Baygirl i'll come with you,my life will not be settled until i hit callum!!!

OMG that was beautiful,i just read the whole story at once but i'm in tears now.....*sniffs* Beautifully written Nicole!

awwwwwww poor Jack,that was so sweet,Beth is so nice. Can't wait till next chapter!

Arghhhhhhh what the hell are you doing Martha??? and callum you little creep i hate you!!!!!!! That was so sad. Nicole you do realize you made a big mistake don't you? lol Fantastic chapter!

awwwwww that was so romantic!!! except when the annoying callum interrupted!! lol Fantastic chapter Nicole and Happy Birthday!!!!

omg Nicole why are you doing this?? lol ARHGGGGG Callum should die I hate him!!!!! I knew that martha would go to him to talk and he'll just comfort her and tell lies about Jack. And right now martha doesn't deserve Jack god she's acting annoying and stubborn. Please get me out of my misery,lol. Very good Update soon

Wat...???? why are there those glances between martha and callum?? like there's something going on between them?? I hate it!!! lol. but awesome chapters Nicole Update soon!!

I've just came back from a incredibly 3 day trip and so have cuaght up with the chapters. Awwwwwww what a lovely ending.I've read both arranged and spilt and they are amazing, you're a very talented writer. Can't wait for your next fan fic.

Mr and Mrs smith-it was okay a bit boring i guess.

Great chapter!! you don't need to change anything at all cuz it's amazing an i love the tension between them. arghh i just hate martha sometimes so damn stubborn,lol.

awwwwwww that was beautiful i've read both the fics they're so Fab,lol your an awesome writer and so happy there's gonna be another one by you but isn't this one the "sequel" ?

awwwww that was so sweet loving this fanfic. Update soon!!

Omg awwwwwww poor martha........and jack. Awesome chapter!! Update soon!!

OMG this is so so good. Can;t wait till the next update!!

Whoo-hoo Go lukey boy!! Love the story!Update soon!!

That was FAB!! Keep going!! but I hate stubborn Martha....lol

Awesome chapter!!omg I HATE JULIA that cow arghhh,lol. Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Awesome chapter!! ARGhhh evil Corey's at it again,lol!!

Hey Nicole i've been reading your fanfic on haac forum but since its down i've been coming here. omg i love this fanfic its so original.Please update soon!!