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great story keep up the gd work and i look forward to the next instalment lol

fluff is always good! great story and jack and robbie were v funny. rob's reaction was classic.

that was sooo adorable and cute - a great ending. i loved this bit: nice how you got it in. i thought the whole story was ab fab and ur writing is v convincing and i cant wait for the sequel. good job!

oh no trouble in paradise! im quite glad its happened though because it keeps the story realistic but i hope they work through it!

aww that was really sweet. the names are nice - lol u used leanne for chloe's middle name!

aww that was so adorable! the babies sound so cute and maddie and lucas are going to make great parents! fantastic writing yet again

great update - i hope robbie and kit are ok.maddie and luc fluff was cute

this is getting sooo gd!! poor maddie - i had a feeling those pains weren't just indigestion! i hope the babies are ok and maddie is if she has to deliver 3 babies with no pain medication! please update soon cause i need to know what happens lol

sorry i havnt feedback earlier but ive just read all the updates and they're fantastic! i got really screamish when maddie cut herself but it was really well written. im sooo glad lucas and maddie are back together - they are so sweet together! keep up the good work!!

great fanfic. i havnt seen the episode yet but u seem to have captured the mood/aftermath well. where did u find the episode from? keep u the gd work on both fanfics

that was sooo adorable - fairies are really cute! awww i love maddie and lucas fluff

YAY lucas woke up (at least i hope that was lucas' hand!) maddie was really sweet in that chapter

yay its so gd that he's breathing but i hope the head injury didnt give him brain damage or amnesia or something so that he doesnt remember maddie. that would b too heartbreaking. loved the update and i agree matilda holden sounded v cool

omg i have to know what happens next. that was really gd, i really hope lucas is ok and that sally can walk again. uve kept the tension up really well

wow this is really good and intense. i cant wait for the next update. please let lucas be ok

great chapter!! i hope lucas is ok please post soon. i wonder who carried on the search - it could be ric cause he's quite impulsive

awww yay a jack and martha baby. this story is getting sooo good

good chapter. if just come back from two a levels so its good to relax and read some good fanfics

ahh get back inside! oh no i knew the happiness couldnt last! i hope cassie and luc dont end up together and things get heated... i hope maddie and the baby r ok. maybe martha nearly dies and jack realises he wants to marry her.

i soo hope its not beth - it cant be. maybe she's being framed by someone. lucas and maddie fluff was lovely - lucas is such an adorable husband! i want him lol!

awww that was so romantic and adorable. you captured the moment really well. i hope not to much drama and trouble lies ahead for the cute newly-weds.

awww no it cant be beth - she's not like that. i'm so confused trying to think about who is guilty! great writing again

great update again - lucas drunk was so cute

i thought those updates were fantastic. i loved the flynn bit, i could just imagine him sprawled all over the floor and jack needs to work on his timing! lol lucas and maddie are so cute together. lovin' it!

im normally a maddie and lucas fan but i really like this fanfic. i love the cute pairing and hope they stay together when lucas and cass come back to town.