OMG, I just read all the story so far and it's horrible (in a good way if you know what I mean)
I really hate Tasha and I liked how Martha called her a tart.
I hate to say this but I also hate Jack, what was he thinking?????
Why didn't he start looking sooner? Three days is a long time without a call, he is a cop and he didn't start looking until they were gone for 14 days! How stupid is that?
And Tasha thinking they were friends again just because Martha didn't want her to die, talk about delusional.
I also think Robbie is going to forgive Tasha which is totally wrong. She so doesn't deserve him.
Lastly I would like to say Guy seems like a very suspect character who has bad intentions.
Okay I think all my anger has been let out.
I am sort of calm.
This has been very well written Nicole, you can get so many people to hate a character that is usually liked so very well done.