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This is an awesome story. It's so fresh and down-to-earth. I can't wait to see what happens next. Still can't work it out now! Belle seems to be a possibility, but then Mattie's always there.

Aww it was great I thought it was sweet. Only thing - call me niave, but it is Tony and Beth getting married right? That makes a nice ending, kinda taking on the family theme further. I can't wait for the sequel and to read your other stories.

Aw that was sweet. Its good to see they are working things out, and that Lucas is willing for Mattie's sake. I feel so sorry for them losing the baby though, I hope its not too much of a bumpy road up ahead.

Great updates. Yay Jack and Kit. He better mean it > I agree with Jackie, i think it's Ric as well

Aww I'm glad they're sortying things out. It was so nice seeing how much it meant to Mattie that they find him. Great Work

Aww that is so sad. And sweet, I'm glad that with everything that Matilda has learnt to not stay mad at Henry.

They were great updates. Poor Ric!! I can't believe Cassie could get herself into this mess. I hope he is okay! And I love Kit and Jack, makes me actually think Jack is alright

YAY! And Update. And a fantastic one. I'm glad it's back I have missed your fics. That was great.

Yeah! The poor thing! And Scott's not around, things with Henry are horrible. I think Matilda needs some happiness *nudge nudge* Can't wait to read more.

That was great and moving writing. Poor Matilda, and poor family. The burns, Kit, now the baby. I hope they pull through.

Aw, that was so emotional. Poor Matilda and Lucas. I feel bad for Henry, his is going to be coping a lot.

Aw no! Poor Matilda! I hope the baby is going to be okay! It was nice of Robbie to accept it. and cute of Henry to be protective! But he took it too far, wanting her to have an abortion.

Ohh, I agree with Jess, Cassie and Matilda were too cute. And Ric being protective. I wonder how badl Henry will take it! Great work

That was great Jackie, I want to see how Cassie and Ric try to help out!

Lovely! I can't wait. I have been missing your updates!

What Tess said That was great Jess, it is going to be a long wait for the next one. I really enjoyed this chapter, it had an almost Spring feel to it (I'm feeling very Springy!) I feel so bad for Maddie, what she's been through. I hope it works out!

Talk about surprising double updates! I can't believe there are only three chapters left. That was extremely well-written. I'm really loving this story and its depth. But I am glad you aren't in a bad place anymore Jess, even if ou think it does not do the story justice. I'd rather it remain as fiction as it can be. Besides, you are doing the story a lot of justice and credibililty. I'm so touched by what is happening. You have twists and turns every time! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Yay! Double whammy!! Great work Jess. The first chapter was so intense, it had me grimacing at times. I really feel for Matilda. Excellent, although dark and depressing, writing. The second one, well what can I say? Lucas didn't stand a chance! But Matilda wants him just as bad. Very hot, and very intense, lol. I can't wait to see where this story is going.

That was fantastic writing Jess, it was really emotional. You did a great job, and it was so deep. Don't worry about the offence, I think that you did it right. It wasn't too explicit but it made an impact. Poor Matilda I'm looking forward to the other stories, and the updates of these. Bring on the writing spree!

Oooh, that was a gorgeous ending! Loved it. I hope you write more soon, i adored this story! Enjoyed it very very much. Can't wait for the epilogue.

Great Jackie! They are so sweet, I want to see how Mattie's protective brothers react. Can't wait to read more!

ooh no. i fear it is matilda that won't make it through. the poor thing, shes so hurt! please update soon.

ooh lots of tension now. Yayy, I love regular updates. I love Jack and Kit. Damn it Martha, go away! Please write more soon

Like Skykat said, I really didn't think it would have been Ric. But I love that it is, because now they are all entangled! I can't wait to see how it all turns out. I hope Lucas tells Mattie the truth, but she'll be so heartbroken.

Aww I love Jack and Kit too! I really really really hope Martha doesn't try to win Jack over. Or that Jack goes back to her Great update Tasha.