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Jack!! Martha made me laugh! I love the mixture of sarcasm and innocence! Martha ought to hook up with someone though... More soon please!

Great couple of chapters! First Laurie, now Lily. It must be something in the letter 'L'... Martha so needs to find another guy to keep herself entertained with That would show Jack!

Gorgeous Too gorgeous! Martha is way to innocent; it's cute. Even though I didn't like her comments, I think Tasha is right. Martha is way too dependant on Jack. And, if things go further with this Laurie, she'll have a rude awakening! Looking forward to reading about their little trip. I think it's practically impossible for them to get closer than they are currently but, I hope we see some changes to their relationship after this holiday Please, please update soon

Welcome back Tasha should mind her own and leave Jack alone He's an absolute sweetheart and would never intentionally hurt Martha ( well I hope so ) Love Jack's safety plan- if all fails, then they can hook up But I would much prefer the natural progression; falling head over heels' in love with one another More soon please!

No updates for two weeks, how are we going to cope?! Aww, poor Martha, it didn't go too well with Billy. Ah well, if he's out of the picture, then it's Jack and Martha all the way This break for the work conference sounds interesting Its just a shame we have to wait to read about it lol Hope you have a fabby holiday and have lots to write about Jack and Martha when you get back!

Excellent, amazing, gripping from start to finish! The words and descriptions used were fantastic. Poor Belle

*sighs* I wish Jack would give me a piggy-back Another gorgeous update! Loving their relationship so much I hope Martha's date does go well....I'd love to see a jealous Jack lol Please update when you can!

That was just I have nothing else to say but, Please update soon!

Fantastic! Excellent chapter Nicole. Brilliant descriptions' of the crash. Poor Jack Hope he's ok. I loved how you had Kim and Lucas following Martha; it was such a touching and caring show of sympathy and love. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait to read more! EDIT: Just a friendly reminder of the 'pact' we made all those months (or years, whatever lol) ago

Jack's just so It was so sweet how his opinion made such a difference to Martha; so cute Hope this Billy is a good fellow. If not, can't wait for Jack to kick his behind! More soon please.

A bit wet Martha?! Jack's so smug it's hialrious. It probably doesn't help the fact that he always seems to be right lol Again, cute interaction in that chapter I was so wanting Martha to say something to that blonde; that would've shown Jacky Absolutely love their relationship. Can't wait to read more.

Aww, what a cute friendship Jack was hilarious in the shower! And yeah, he's definately sexy This is fab. Can't wait to read more.

Aww, lovely ending That Jet was such a jerk in the last chapter Glad Jack punched the idiot Great fic; looking forward to reading the new one!