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If Martha's feeling guilty, she should stop doing things that make her feel that way, i.e. sleeping with Hugh! Jack is just a sweetheart I want him to have some fun too but, not stoop to her level and have an affair with Jamie. Although, their friendship is real cute Oh dear indeed. The preview sounds a little worrying (I hope Martha's on the recieving end )

Aww, that was really sad. I felt sorry for both of them, especially when Jack was re-living his nightmare Great chapter! Can't wait for more.

Jaaaack!! He's going to be devastated if he finds out. Martha She should ought to be able to control herself See what you do Rachel??! You've made my anger for Martha re-surface! Hugh is starting to annoy me now And, I never thought that'd happen... Update soon please

*shakes head* Tut tut Martha! You're falling for it; hook, line and sinker Would love it for Jack to turn up at the Club he can show off his rebellious side! Hugh is still But, he needs to back off! lol

Don't sit back and watch Jack! Umm, don't really know what else to say, kind of depressed at the mo (just read the scans ) Ohh, one thing I will say; don't give up Jack! Update soon please.

Marthaaa Get a grip girl! I know Hugh is the hot, new, bad-ass in town ( ) but, you have the sweetest boyfriend ever! I'm thinking Hugh's plan is going swimmingly More soon please!

Me too Jack should stick with his gut instincts that's telling him Hugh is trouble; you're right Jack, he is! The picnic was very

Hugh's really sly; I think he's got an ulterior motive Jack's really cute but, I don't want Hugh to take advantage of that.

*gulps* Poor Martha! Aww, and Jack put his foot down and was going to be early for once. Excellent start; can't wait to read more!

By busy Rachel, you mean perving on Moto GP riders, right?? I'm not sure what you mean; that chaper was great! I could really feel Martha feeling uneasy. And Hugh he's such a bad-ass. But, if he break's Jacky's heart; i won't be amused. More soon please!

That was brilliant! Very intense and dramatic. Poor Martha and Sophie. Paul's a psycho Can't wait for more!

Rachel's got a new fic Chapter 1- aww, Jack and Martha are so cute. And a nerdy Jack; thats just too cute lol. It's really swwet how Martha stuck up for him. Her friends are idiots No one should get away with dissing Jack! Chapter 2- hmm, it seems my comments about Martha sticking by Jack were a little premature. Ok, so a slight dilemma. I'm loving this bad-ass Hugh ( ) but, Martha shouldn't be so transfixed on him...what about Jack?? I'm thinking things are about to get a little 'intense' between Hugh and Martha... If Martha falls for Hughs' charms poor Jack will be gutted and I don't want to read that lol. Great couple of chapters. This is really interesting. Can't wait for more!

Marthaaa! That Paul is such a moron Brody and Jack need to get that money; and soon. I didn't think it would be possible but, I'm actually loving another male character more than Jack in this fic...Brody rocks! Please update soon!

Great update Nicole. Really want Martha to give Jack a chance to expalin. She really shouldn't be so stubborn about it. She should know Jack wouldn't intentionally put her in danger Eamon was a cute and sweet as always. As was Richard which makes a pleasant surprise Hope there's Jack in the next chapter. Can't wait to read more!

That was brill! Oh dear, poor Martha Brody and Paul need to get there quick smart and save her. Stupid Paul and Brianna. Can't wait for more!