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Don't like the sound of that Jack is so cute He'll even bear the cold for Martha; isn't that just adorable! But, I feel sorry for Sophie She still really loves Jack, bless. Oh, and the chapter where Sophie and Jack break up was brilliantly written. I could imagine it happening so clearly. I want to read more...but I'm scared of what you have planned *gulps* lol.

Loving all these updates! Aww, poor Martha. She's seems to be opening up to Jack and getting closer to him...not sure if that's a good thing or a bad at the moment Love Brody Oh, and Jack of course. Can't wait to read more.

Great couple of updates; they were brilliant! She didn't lose the baby and gave it up for adoption; how sad Really hating that Paul dude as well What a scumbag! Aww, Brody is ace; would love to have a big brother like him. And, good on him for punching Paul. And Jack... well, he's just doing what he knows best; being protective and just generally a nice guy. Hope they tell the police. Absolutely loving this. More soon when you get the chance!

Martha has had it really hard; bless her I hate that Paul Jack is the best listener, ever But, I hope she tells Soph. It will help her to understand Martha better and maybe her anger will subside. Excellent chapter; can't wait to read more!

I second everything Rachel said. This is really intresting and intriguing! Can't wait for more. Please update soon!

Loved the opening sequence. Jack; he's so cute Poor Martha. Blaming herself Understandable I guess but, Karen was horrible and it wasn't like Martha pushed her. Hope Martha can work things out with Brett. Final chapter? Will miss this fic but, I hope that means another is on the way? lol

That was fan-tas-tic!! Really, really intense! Karen's dead? Oh my god, I'm so relieved for Martha! That must have been awful for Jack, to watch Martha in peril like that. Thank goodness they got there when they did *gulps* Hopefully thats the end of that saga; more happier times now please?

Aww, thats was really sad All the poems were beautiful and the plastic rose; that was such a beautiful touch. I'm still angry at you for killing Jack though Great fic; hope you do a sequel!

That was fab! Really, really cute and sweet! I'm glad Sarah was only a friend (I feel bad now for calling her an obstacle in my last post ) Hope you write some more fics

Although it was accidental, Martha spilling piping hot coffee on Lilly is funny! I shouldn't laugh though, I scoulded the inside of my mouth drinking coffee too quickly the other day...very painful Martha and Jack should both get their acts together and just admit their true feelings (and the same should happen in the show too ) Update when you can.

Aww, that was really good Tash! I'm loving the Martha and Hugh friendship; it's so ace. And Hugh is lovely So, Martha still loves Jack, Jack's secretly jealous of Hugh and Martha's friendship, Sarah's an insignificant obstacle blocking the path of true love and it's approaching Jack and Martha's one year wedding anniversairy...dinner should be heaps fun This is really great (wish it was longer than a two-parter ) but can't wait for the meal; let the jealousy and resurfacing of old memories/love commence!!

You killed Jack! Why?? What did he ever do to you? Aww, the family is incomplete without Jack. That wasn't very nice Becky

Jack's so clever! Aww, and he's the doting husband and protective father; how adorable Loved the way he was taunting Corey but, Corey was dishing it out also Grr, the way Corey was always snarling and gloating was really annoying; he was getting way under my skin Now that they know where Martha is, I hope she's ok. Please update soon; this is really great!