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Great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Yay!! Can't wait!!! lol Great story update soon

OMG!!! Great. Update now! Please I hope Martha is ok...

Good start. Liking the names lol Jodi Holden or Paul Holden, Wow! it sounds wierd saying there names like that lol or is it just me. Update soon please.

^^Great fic and I enjoyed reading it. Poor Jack now we deffinetly need to give him a big hug!

Yay! they got married lol with a minor problem I.e Charlie

I can't help think Jack is up to something lol Great chap looking forward to more.

I'm happy that Jack and Martha are getting it on But poor Serena hope she gets well and finds her prince and not Marthas. Anyway good chapter, update ASAP!

Aww that was soo goood Nicole! I know I wanted a bigger fuss made about that episode but no it was mostly rain lol J&M is better than rain!!! Lol Jack trying to say 'i love you' was soo funny lol I can imagin him making himself out to be a Casanova lol. Thank you for writing a cute, sweet and GREAT fanfic!

Sian agrees you should add more chaps your a cool writer.

Thank you!!! for the update and for making both Jack and Martha ok Now all that has to happen is they stop being stubborn admit they love eachother and get back together. Great writing, update soon

WOW just so wow!! Omg! Ididnt think Martha would die that was a good twist but then you put Jack in the loony bin. They were such good twists in the storyline and I must admit Ihad teary eyes when Martha died and when Jack told his dad to keep his side of the deal. I was really hoping for a happy end but that is such a good ending and you handled the whole rape storyline really well and with sensitivity. This has been an ecallent fic thank you for writing it xxx

^ Ditto. Great update. Can't wait to see what Tasha is going to do.

Urghhh Megan. Go away. Keep your hands off My Marthas Jack. ^ That line had me laugh outloud, can rely on Martha for a funny insult lol and the reactions to it were funny lol Belle and spitting the drink on Ric i pictured it lol Aww Lucas looking out for Martha was soooo adorable, they have a sweet friendship and Tony was sweet too. Anyway great update thank you! Can't wait for more Ihope jack doesnt lower himself to do anything with Megan (eww)

Awww bless them. good chap can't wait for more xx

friends? Just at the moment?? *Hint Hint* lol Update soon please

Everything she said!! Wow a great ending for a great story really cute! Thank you for writing it bay_girl!!. xxx

Please update soon YAY! Shes ok now her and Jack can hook up and live happily every after xxx (Great chapter)

That was my exact response. I.HATE.MEGAN. What they said i'm to angry with Megan to write my own comment lol update soon xx

Shame its the end but what a Great ending. Thank you for writing such a good story and I cannot wait till your next fic is up When Jack said 'our baby' that was soo sweet. xxx

Great update it was soo sweet when Jack said 'together' looking forward to next chap xxx

Just wondering if you read the first two that this fic carries on from? While Nicole has put Martha and Jack through agony in this one alone, if you read undercover cop and undercover cop 2 you'll see that she has has played God with their lives many, many times. And she's dragged it out over a year or two i think.... talk about cruel True lol yeh I have read them, poor Jack and Martha and yeah she is cruel but a good writer please carry on xxx Lol! Which is why my next fic has NO crazy's in whatsoever!! (Apart from Robbie, but I'm sure we can handle that lol) But hey.. I'm still playing god. It's what I do best. Can't wait for it lol!!!! Jack and Martha have a break? they can be happy yeh? lol update soon please xx

AWW the end! Well done though I love this story and can't wait for the sequel!!! Your an amazing writer and this fic was great!!! *big smile* Poor Jack and poor Martha (but its Jack and Martha-they're meant to be) and I cannot believe they let Lauren and James ruin their relationship:( . I love those moments when Coleen lets slip something that she should'nt- bless her heart she means well enough. xxx

What she said:)

Just wondering if you read the first two that this fic carries on from? While Nicole has put Martha and Jack through agony in this one alone, if you read undercover cop and undercover cop 2 you'll see that she has has played God with their lives many, many times. And she's dragged it out over a year or two i think.... talk about cruel True lol yeh I have read them, poor Jack and Martha and yeah she is cruel but a good writer please carry on xxx