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Aww poor Sally Stay strong Peter you have a stalker to catch mate!!!!!!!lol Anyway thanks for the update, good chapter please update as soon as you can thanks:)

Everyone doesnt have to worry because Lucas is on the case! he will get Martha and Jack back together Good chapter update soon please xx

Nooo Jack can't be a murderer!! hes too nice to murder anyone. Well my advice to jack is now to chuck Seans body in the sea or just run now but before doing this wipe all fingerprints and go make yourself an alibi! quick!. Lol but may be before you do the above check he is alive because like Nicole said he could have a can of tomatoes Good chapter update as soon as you can please. Hope Sean is ok for Jack and Martha and Dylan sake. (Don't care about Serena she can like blow up or disappear in thin air.) x

YAY!! Jacks ok!!! Poor kim Love the chapters there great. Keep up the good work. Updaet as sopon as you can please. x

Awwwww Tony and Jack soo sweet. Get Martha out soon Jack needs her and they both need to be happy happy Martha and Jack!!! and they love eachother :) Great chapter seriously I think I'm addicted to this fanfic your an writer please update as you can please?? x

Noo you stopped! Wow! Didnt think he would be part of the Chambers family that was as hock a good one becasue I thought it was something to do with money. Jack run in and save Martha and umm smash Davids face in. Good chapter. Please update sooon:) I love this story. x

Noooooooo!! you can't go out with Callum. Its wrong, silly, stupid and noooooo. I'm soo mad with Martha now how can she get over Jack like that!!! Its all Peters fault can't the man keep it in his pants! Fine if Martha wants to go out the freak that leaves Jack single, hot and free! lol:P Anyway please update soon it was a good chap except for Martha accepting Callum idea of a date. x

Lol Funny!! made me laugh and I agree with everthing said and I will help you pay for an electric saw

Love this story!! Update as soon as you can please x

Lol! I agree but I didn't hit the screne I shouted loud enough!. I'm angry lol not with you Nicole with Callum the freak!!. God! Martha! how can you be soo silly?? Callum is Mental!(mental with a capital M) and poor Jack if Martha don't want you I will have youuu. Anyway good writing! update as soon as you can please.

Love it!!! Update soon please

Thank you:). Can't wait till tomorrow lol. I think I might go aswell*yawns*. Goodnight x

Aawww how sweet. Can't wait for the next chap!!. Sianx

Agreed totally. eww Corey is unhinged and gross. lol Poor Martha I would be soo scared and Irene watching and not being able to help Messgae to Corey 'Jacks going to kick your a*s' Great chap, can't wit for next chapter!!! Sianx

Great start. Wonder what the secret is?? update soon please. Sianx

Yessss!! it is Tony!!. Jack kick Callums bottom lol:P Anyway good chapter!. This story keeps getting better, I'm hooked. update when you can. xSianx

Good chap!!! Aww Jack And Martha! soo cute. Macca and Marthas relationship is soo adorable *evil Mason hes a freak*. Can you please update soon. Your a good writer and this story rocks!!!. xSianx

Omg! that was soo beautifully wrote I was in tears lol I'm still crying now. Wow you wrote that with so much feeling and I would never have been able to write anything like that without breaking down every two minutes. Jack would make the best dad in the world and Martha would make a good mum ( the baby is blessed with good looks lol). Tasha was soo kind to have their child for them and Martha not being able to see the Matt made me cry loads because she really wanted a child. *I'm crying again lol* Anyway your an amaing writer and you finished a fantastic story with the most fantasic ending. Well done on your superb writing skills displayed in writing a emtional topic! xSianx

aww Poor Jack Good chap!. Update soon plz. Lovin the story. xSianx

Evil Mason. Jack you better protect Martha!! how adorable was Macca and Marthas scene? ( wish my brothers cared liked that lol ) Anyway Good story! keep up the good writing. can't wait for the next chapter plz updat sooon. xSianx

Been revising for my GCSEs so I havent been on the computer much but finally caught up with this story. I love this story and your an awesome writer!!! keep up the good writing:) urghhh Callum (don't like him at all) Jack trust Martha and just kick Callum ass!!! Martha Jack loves you Callum is just a loony lol:P Please update as soon as you can hun!. xsianx (p.s Happy birthday & have a great day)

Love this story!. Jacks going to kick Corey's ass when he sees what he has done to Martha (can't wait)lol Well done Martha letting them know it was Corey (no-one will blame you or call you bad names). Hope they rescue Martha and Irene soon. Please update soon your an amazing write and this story is brill. xsianx

Amazing story! poooor Martha and Jack :[ (the Martha and Jack scenes were soooo cute) Lauren is one evil b**ch!! Keep up the good writing. Please update soon:) xsianx

Love this story Hope Martha and Jack get together soon but not too soon because i love how you have written it! Evil Julia! hurting poor martha and lucas is soo sweet trying to get them back together cnt wait to see whats in the envelope Your an amazing writer :] Keep up the good work!! xx

i love reading this story adn the one before your an amazing write and the story is brill and i cnt wait to read your next story :)x going to miss this story when its finished lol *sounds wierd i know* neway cnt wait for next chap XsianX