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great, peter if you find martha i might believe that your not that dumb, but finding her quickly and cleverly will only loose you that title great update please update soon

thats happens on my mums - i think though cause she gots some dodgy computer though great last update

my comments from the last two chapters: fantasique aww aunty tash seems nice Amanda - really Lucuc - awww so careing ummm Beth - looking out for family tony - well done for restraining beth i cant think of any more at the moment - memory like a goldfish please update soon

that said it all for me, especially after re watching Flynns funeral

great update, its really good i hope this means that there goung to get back together *hopeful grin* yeh me to it was so sad, im glad i had the tissues to hand

its really good, please please update soon, awww poor matilda, a nightmare, but yay go her for ruining Amandas dress, YAY,

please update soon, its really good

ohh its really good, your a great writer, please update soon, why cant things ever go smoothly?

well cause i was the only one who asked it was probably clear but being blonde quite often dont pick up on things/ and am easily confuseed. anyway thanks for explaining it to me. YAY he wolk up please update soon

wow its so good. just one question, so Jack isnt actually in a coma? please update soon.

WHy wHY WHY? JAck it is EASY - just say "I forgive you Martha" and you can live happily ever after,,, Is that to hard to ask? well i guess it is so i will leave and please update soon because then they can forgive each other and live happily ever after

Haha! This is what the sky was like. (There was no hole, though!) It was really dark. last time i was in a storm like that i was driving to my house in Florida and was very dark and it looked as if there was a whole but it was actually lightening. it was scary cause i was in a little car and it was very windy

JAck was so sweet and Lucus so thoughtful and Flynn so chatty and megan so bloody annoying. i hate that girl. she makes me so angry. GRRRRRR. im going to calm down and then ill be back and hopefully soon you could update *begging* please?

oh i thought you updated. anyway its really good please update soon

fantastique, jack is going to save martha (again?)

oh my gosh that was so sad, but Macca is here for you know.... please pretty please update soon cause its so good and emotionals and your a great writer

its so good, and realy well covered. well done. Mason is descusting and Jack please help and save Martha. run run run like the wind

What a georgeus baby it is going to be, if its a boy in 16 years hes mine, edit: just thought ill be 32, oh well he can be my toy boy

Sweet, maddie and her cravings she better watch out else she might go fat. But that would never happen would it?

awwww sweet, jack was going to the rescue. Yay! Hipp Hipp horay!!! and they all live hapily ever after... (please)

yeh i didnt think of that last time i red it but then now ive rered it and why didnt she say it back. rics not that greay yeh i didnt think of that last time i red it but then now ive rered it and why didnt she say it back. rics not that great

bay girl this is fantastic i love it so much awwww mathas pregnant hehehehe surve that megan girl right just promise me 1 thing: i got the impression from your comments on one of nicoles fics that you didnt like martha much (am i right) just please let this have a happy endin. after everyone trying to brake them up, personally i think that they diserve it.

oooooh aaaaah - its gripping, i love it but nicole why did you have to end it there? oh dear another cliff hanger - i know you dont like them so why do you make us suffer? i think i might go and cry. Jack please live Martha Run, run, run like ze wind (and get away from callam and do on him that move jack taught him cause then hed be proud of you)

evil lauren this could be interesting, but oh am i happy that martha now knows so they can be 1 big happy familily, - PLEASE - yippeee dippeee doooooo and please update so i can see them get back together and my mind can be at rest

oh no - not mason. hehehe i expect a trobled ride for jack and martha - how could you? please pretty please update soon, a nice long update