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ohmy god i think i now what is going to happen now. hehehe that would be so call... great writing

its so good and you already said that he doesnt die so i am ofically happy. yay. but how could you have left it there after everyone saying that you always leave it at the most suspencful parts. tut tut tut. PLEASE Update soon

wow - im in shock martha = clever gun + martha = dead corey bay girl = dead also if doesnt update soon, and i dont want a murder on my hands, so do the best thing for both our sakes and please update like now cause then you wont die, and i wont go to prison or die of suspence so pleasepleaseplease....

yeh great you updated but you just left it there with him practically dieing, how many more near death experiences does he have to go through before he and martha live happilily PLEASE update Sonn cause like jack im dying here

awww i love it cant wait for the next update

oh the engagment ring - i was wondering which one you ment, i'm easily confussed. anyway great chapter

nicole i could nt put it better my self

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH OH MY GODNESS! PULL YOUR SELF TOGETHER YOU IDIOT. *tries to calm but finds it very difficult* bacially what i am trying to say is that martha: needs to NOT move on and listen to Jack and all can be happily ever after. peter: your just getting in the way so go home Jack: stop fluffing around and talk to martha callam:get lost and go to what ever place that suits you most me: pay for the electric saw so something can be done about callam and SOON any one want to chip in? Nicole: 2 things this is great BUT please pretty please get martha and jack back to gether and soon, else i wont be responsible for what happens between the electric saw callan and me. and 2 update soon so they can get back to gether and live happily ever after and i wont be put in prison for murder this is fantastique so please update sooon

ooooh i love it, there all happy, married, and now maddie is pregnant yay yay yay all is good in the lucus and matilda household

ohhhh it is good please keep updating cause it is good!

not necessarily. It says next installment will be the last. Haa haa! sorry I like keeping people in suspense! lol. well i must say that im glad that that wasnt the end and i must say home much i loved the ending apart from the fact that now it has ended so there will be no more which would be sad as you are a great writer especially about jack and martha my favorite couple in the world so please write another one prephaphs that goes on cause it is so sweet, but make it longer cause then it would nt end so fast, also, im confussed, is this a carryon one cause if it is then what is it carrying on to but if not i really liked it as itself on its own if oyu know what i mean. bacially what i am trying to say is that it was really good but ended to soon apart from me thinking that it ended before it had actually ended and me wondering if it was a sequal... wow im out of breathe just writing this all, please if this is now the end write another and if its not (even though i think it is) update soon cause i have really enjoyed it and think that the idea was so nice that jack gave martha back the photo engraved awwwwww. i thought he was going to give her a promise ring cause it isnt that he hasnt loved her the whole time that would have been cute so i might go and write my one story now, but i prefere your idea with the photo and im so glad that jack is going to be 'daddy' to marthas baby. awwwww

finally a good ending which isnt a cliff hanger celebrations and YAY they are back togethere yippee dippeee dooo all is good

talk talk talk, then get back together, then update and please do it fast as it is really good

and it was christmas how lovely - i love this story

hehehe peter is back. maybe he can knock some sence into martha and callum great chapter by the way

awww its so sweet, just one question what is it a sequal to? please keep updating soon

that was so lovely awww there married and cassie didnt brake them up that was so lovely awww there married and no body broke them up. youve made my day so im off to bed. please keep updating night night

yay another person with a secret, just wondering could you update soon so we can find out what it is? great so far

wow it was so good, im so pleased that you finished it like that cause if they lived happily ever after i wouldnt have suited it as much i dont think, anyway *wipes tears away* keep writing cause you are really rather good in my opinion, and everyone elses it seems, it was so lovely brilliantly written, thankyou xxxxxx

oh my god - what can i say, corey is just plain discusting, i feel so sorry for martha, jack go beat up corey and then shoot him if you want, irene just dont die and bay girl just update soon please..

i love it its so cool just please dont try to brake them up cause thats what everyones doing but i guess if you want you can cause they will always come together in the end *fingers crossed* yay

ohh its so good now listen cassie stick to your word and leave lucas and maddie alone and run along to ric please dont make it to dramatic cause drama always caused people to break up

oh my golly gosh, why is it that another person is trying to brake them up. please dont let Lauren suceed * fingers crossed * great writing please post more soon

hurry jack hurry save them its soo good cant wait till you update